Our Love Grows Towards the Sun

The extra chapter is over. Thank you for your continued support. Liuli Huansha is already conceiving the next better book and hopes to present it to you in a better state. Thank you~

Enthusiastic and satisfying attitude

Come on, great god, looking forward to the new book

The new chapter "Youxi" has been updated, babies can continue reading~

Congratulations on the completion, looking forward to the new book

Shasha, you are the best. Come on

Finally, what I want to say is that I know that for the author, his/her works are like the person he/she loves most and cannot be questioned by others. Even though I know this, I can't help but question some of them, hoping that it won't cause public outrage. Questioning, I hope the author can write better works in the future!

Then, the characters in this book are not distinctive enough, not unique enough, and lack something to attract readers. For example, the names of the characters in the book are not attractive enough, and the characters' personalities are not distinctive enough. Just think about it, there are so many authors writing articles now, why would readers choose to read your book? If your protagonist and supporting characters do not have famous names, distinctive personalities, or special encounters, then what reason is there to attract readers?

Again, the three elements of a novel are characters, plot and environment. The author Baby's writing is too straightforward and lacks the most critical character dialogue, plot, and description of the environment.

First of all, when novice authors like us start a book, it is best not to write a preface. Firstly, it is not necessary, and secondly, having a preface will affect the reader's involvement. I personally think that direct text is more effective. It is better for readers to explore the character relationships and social background in the story bit by bit, rather than introducing them specifically in the preface, which would make the article lengthy and unattractive to read.