Under the sky in the world, there are "causes and effects" that can be found.
Xu Jiang, who came to this world for no reason, quietly saw many scenery in his heart.
The ten-thousand-year-old corpse in the Burial Ming Pavilion opened its eyes, and its eyes revealed an ancient immortal who had fallen into the mortal world in the Immortal Residence.
There are many corpses buried in the Luoshen Mausoleum, telling the story of an unknown period of time, when a girl in green walked between heaven and earth... With great courage... She cut off the cause and effect of the two worlds...
The people of the foreign race only think that luck can lead to the path... But it is difficult to know... This seat has long been reserved...
Destiny is irreversible. In any case, the ending has been decided from the beginning...
Work hard, and Bai Fumei will be right in front of you.
I saw a post on Zhihu. The chapter names can be used to attract attention. For example, the first chapter can be called I'm going to make a corpse right after the game starts.
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In addition, if it is not a cool article, the perspective and writing style can take the direction of the general manager. It should be good to expand and retract it.
Say it first.
Well, that's it.
Let's talk about the problem.
The introduction is average, and the opening paragraph is too easy to get a 404.
The perspective is relatively scattered and cannot grasp the main thread of the background. If it is passionate, the protagonist has to be pretentious. If the fourth chapter is not pretentious, readers of this type will not read it. Moreover, it is difficult to retain readers with a long background introduction, and the subsequent cluttered perspectives do affect reading.
No good suggestions, ugh
Brother, is this a cool novel? If not, the rhythm is okay. I feel like after reading the first chapter, all I can think about is the battle.
The novel is wonderful, support it and support it! May you become a god overnight! Looking forward to visiting again and cheering each other up!
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Work hard, and Bai Fumei will be right in front of you.
I saw a post on Zhihu. The chapter names can be used to attract attention. For example, the first chapter can be called I'm going to make a corpse right after the game starts.
The 1,000th click is me
Check-in support welcomes return visit
Check in to collect, hope you will visit again
In addition, if it is not a cool article, the perspective and writing style can take the direction of the general manager. It should be good to expand and retract it.
Say it first. Well, that's it. Let's talk about the problem. The introduction is average, and the opening paragraph is too easy to get a 404. The perspective is relatively scattered and cannot grasp the main thread of the background. If it is passionate, the protagonist has to be pretentious. If the fourth chapter is not pretentious, readers of this type will not read it. Moreover, it is difficult to retain readers with a long background introduction, and the subsequent cluttered perspectives do affect reading. No good suggestions, ugh
Brother, is this a cool novel? If not, the rhythm is okay. I feel like after reading the first chapter, all I can think about is the battle.
The novel is wonderful, support it and support it! May you become a god overnight! Looking forward to visiting again and cheering each other up!