I’m Quite the Immortal While Practicing Demonic Cultivation

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Say it first. The title of the book is just right, the introduction is okay, and the protagonist has a bit of a relaxed feel. This type of article is more suitable for the mainstream fantasy style, and there should be readers through channels. Let's talk about the problem, the switching between cultivating immortals and cultivating demons is unnatural, and the first chapter was written in a prison and was immediately taken out. There is no logic, and the plot is too bland given the subject matter. It would be better to first write about the protagonist trying to escape and being tortured, then awakening the demonic energy to fight back, and then encountering the guidance of an expert after escaping, preferably a time traveler with some system. The advantage of the time traveler has not come out. So, here's the problem.

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Language is artistic! Unique style! This book will surely show its charm for thousands of miles! Du Ni Wenxiang came to visit with "Jiangshan Hiring Fenghua"! May you be blessed with good fortune during the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day! The Double Festival is sweet and auspicious!

That makes sense. If you die again, you will die twice. You can't die again.

The first chapter is wonderfully written and avoids the poisonous points perfectly. Come on!

The first book review is also mine.

Brother, your first time in the book circle is mine!