The Golden Doctor Becomes a Phoenix

It's great, but the ending is too hasty!

Thank you to the author for your hard work. I hope the novel will be finished as soon as it is ready. It should not be too long. It will be more popular if it focuses on the main plot!

In fact, the overall story is good, but it ends in an anticlimax. The main line of the story is still clear, but the content is too long. At the end of the writing, I guess the author himself forgot what he wrote earlier, so some of the content is contradictory. For example, he clearly used aphrodisiac in the beginning, but said he has only heard of it but never used it in the end. There is also a bit of confusion in the characters. The author is probably not happy to write it seriously, so he ended it hastily. If he had known it, he would not have read it.

Everyone, please don't fall into the trap. How can I put it this way? The author's book of more than 2 million words could have been written with more than 1 million words. I don't know whether I want to express revenge or see a doctor. What's more, what makes people speechless is that no matter who I treat, there are all kinds of obstructions before starting the treatment. After the treatment, the patient's family members make unreasonable accusations and various misunderstandings. I am really speechless. Forget it once or twice. It is like this every time. Is human IQ so low in the author's mind? There was also a young cousin who was staying at the prefect's house, yelling and drinking, which was not logical at all.

The heroine's soul was reborn in her body three years later, and she used her previous life's medical skills to uncover the truth about her family's destruction step by step. The plot is compact and moves forward step by step, so watch slowly! ✌

The storyline is pretty good, but the author can't get the names right, and the ending is too watery.

The writing is good, and the first part is quite fascinating, but the story about the stepmother is too heavy on the old lady. She treats all kinds of people, the army treats too many people, and treating Mrs. Chen is too tedious. There are only a few chapters left, and the pace is very slow. In the last chapter, there is a direct coup and she becomes the crown prince. I can't watch the later stages, but the front part is particularly good.

There are so many prescriptions and conditions, and the author has dealt with them one by one

I've been on the train tonight and didn't arrive at the station until after 11 o'clock. I wrote an update on the train.

It's been two days in a row. I feel sleepy after dinner and I plan to squint for a while. When I open my eyes again, it will be daytime the next day. Is it really okay to be so sleepy? These two chapters are updated OTZ that I didn't send out after I fell asleep yesterday.