The Divine and Demonic Tomb

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You are not suitable for writing short-form articles, which emphasize pretentiousness and slap in the face. Your pretentiousness and slap in the face are very stiff, and it feels like you are forcing this line. I admire the way the fighting scenes are written. This is your advantage and the most attractive highlight of your novel, so don't lose it. There are two books that are very suitable for your writing style, "Jiang Ye" by the author Mao Ni, and "Starting from the Gusu Bird", you can study them This suggestion is my personal opinion, not authoritative. Don't take it too seriously. Come on!

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This is a novel with prudent writing, and there are shadows of Gu Long's martial arts. However, in the previous martial arts competition, a woman was introduced. I don't know if she is the heroine. If she is, it is a failure. Important characters must be described in detail. Although the fighting was exciting, it lacked a sense of excitement. You made the moves very thrilling, but you didn't let the protagonist get injured and put him in an adversity that made people think he was going to be killed. Therefore, even if you made the fighting thrilling, it still couldn't make people feel nervous and exciting. The male protagonist must be suppressed and beaten first, preferably injured, and then fight back vigorously to feel refreshed. Also, the psychological expression is not mature enough. When the two masters of the villain die, the villain must be written as panicked to make people feel happy. If he is calm, do you think there will be feelings? Then the appearance of the two men who died in the fight is meaningless. The above are personal opinions and do not represent authority. We encourage each other, have collected them, and support potential authors. Come on!

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