Cultivating Immortality Through the Five Elements

At the beginning, I was sitting in the teleportation formation. It was written a bit childishly. Readers don't have a little bit of scheming. Why can they keep going?

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Support, favorite,,, I don't know why, still?

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Come on (✪▽✪)! Be the first to support! The writing is very good. If you have a million dollars, you will become a god.

It would be more appropriate to borrow a storage bag.

The description of insignificant people is too long. It's been forty chapters and I still can't enter the inner door. I only went out once to experience it. How many years do I plan to write this book?

As a first book, it's a very good beginning It can be seen from the first few chapters that the concept and plot are very solid. Among a bunch of books on immortality, it can be said to be outstanding. It can be seen from the beginning that the author pays more attention to the realism of the article than other authors. The protagonist has very little aura. This is a very good idea and a very groundbreaking opening chapter. The writing style is also good, and there is huge room for improvement. I hope to see Yun Kai in the future. The plot is very solid. The character setting is more like a real person who has better luck than others and relies on his own efforts to change the fate of others. At the same time, I leave a small opinion. You can add some more interesting plots. It is humorous while not forgetting to follow the main line, so that more scenery and plot directions can be integrated into the hearts of readers. I hope the author will work harder in the future and write more cleverly.

I really like to see the main character being a casual cultivator, but not many people write about it

Not bad, there are quite a lot of details.