The World Is at Peace When All Are One

The writing is not good, I hope you can give me more valuable opinions, thank you.

The writing is very good, one million people will become a god! Come on (✪▽✪)

I'm new here. If my writing is not good, I hope you can give me more feedback. Thank you.

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Reading in the evening, I met by chance, it was fate, and I collected the masterpieces! We look forward to visiting each other, supporting each other, and working hard together! I apologize in advance if I have disturbed you. Thank you for supporting you and encouraging each other. !

Awesome

There are still twelve days left, and there is no hope of living. I am very hungry, but I can't eat. I still want to wear nice clothes in the summer, and I don't know if I will see summer come. I really want to live.

Time flies so fast (surprise!) There are still thirteen days before I leave this world. Suddenly I started thinking about where people will go after they die. In fact, if you know your destination, you will no longer have the fear of death.

I still have half a month to turn into an angel... Hmm... I hope I can finish writing the novel before I ascend... Hurry up... Hurry up...

The characters' movements, language, and expressions are all well described, and the characters in the book come alive on the page.