A tragic romance, with both physical and emotional torment.
Knowing it could never work, even throwing yourself into the flames like a moth had lost all meaning. Seated upon the throne of supreme authority, Si Yan exuded a kingly aura as he gazed at the portrait on the table before him. The girl in it had bright, lively eyes, and every frown and smile seemed to send him a flirtatious glance. She was so pure and lovely, seemingly without a care in the world. Just one smile from her could soothe the heart and thaw the feelings he had kept frozen for years.
Si Yan, I don't blame you. I never have. You are the one I love, even if no one blesses us, even if the very first moment we met was a mistake. I love you, so very much. What happened to us was my fault. I caused my younger brother's death and hurt my own mother. No one else is to blame.
We are all God's favored children, and we are merely shrouded in dust.
I have never seen a character arrangement like this for the heroine Ye Qianling: she is obviously good-looking and values family ties, but she is also stupid, cute, careless, abused, kicked to the bone, and stubborn. She is the worst heroine there is. She is obviously the goddess of war and a pampered little princess, but she has experienced ups and downs. She carries secrets that she does not want to tell anyone, and does not trust her family's ability to help her solve her difficulties. She has to endure everything by herself. The male protagonist Si Yan also had a bumpy growth journey, licking his life on a knife's edge every day, and carrying a blood feud. Although he was doted on by his mother and concubine when he was a child, he had no choice but to grow up quickly due to the various schemes and frame-ups around him. From this point of view, it seems that the heroine and the male protagonist match up well, but I am starting to look forward to what kind of plot arrangements there will be for these two Beijingers.
I found that the female and male counterparts also had such difficult characters. Perhaps in the war-torn era, everyone had a mission to survive and become a latecomer. The various obstacles faced by Ye Qianmu and Sui Gaolang are not very noticeable in this environment.
In the current novel environment, this plot and character setting have a tragic tone. Of course, it is also a special feature that distinguishes it from other online novels. It is also a test for the author. After all, many people read books without thinking. The plot is quite special, and the language and psychological portrayal of the characters are well controlled. However, the author needs to pay more attention to the handling of small details: for example, when the heroine was misunderstood by her father, and Emperor Guangde, as the head of a country, could not control himself, he personally beat up the little daughter he once loved so much. After the heroine was treated by her brothers, "It has not been 24 hours since this happened" "Big brother, second brother, the operation is over"... Etc. Pay attention to the wording of these small details, because the appearance of these inappropriate words weakens the appeal of the overall article. You can pay attention to this if it needs to be modified later by the author.
Of course, the heroine has gone through so much and even joined the secret guard organization. I hope that in the plot that turns around later, the author can prevent the heroine from being as miserable as the male protagonist. At the same time, he also needs to arrange the storyline in a more reasonable and appropriate way.
I wrote so many of my own superficial opinions after reading the book today. It is definitely not to discredit or attack the author. I saw that the author's ideas and writing style are different from others. I cherish talents and want to see the author improve more, so I left a message. If the above words are wrong, please forgive me.
We will start updating normally from tomorrow, my dears.
It brings me to tears. I feel so sorry for the fifth princess. What obsession makes her persist?
It's so cruel, I can't stand it at all, and I'm bursting into tears
Hello, Mr. Wulan~ I'm here to visit you. Today is also a day of working hard on coding~ Good night, go to bed early and don't be tired.
Friends (๑°3°๑), I'm back and starting to update
I'm going to get my hair permed today and I won't update since I have a dinner tonight. I'll update as usual tomorrow, hehe.
What a strong desire for revenge that made Emperor Guangde so ruthless to his daughter
I don't believe it was the queen who ordered Wan Feng to kill her. Someone must have framed her.
The emotional scenes between Ye Qianmu and Sui Gaolang are also quite sad.
I have never seen a character arrangement like this for the heroine Ye Qianling: she is obviously good-looking and values family ties, but she is also stupid, cute, careless, abused, kicked to the bone, and stubborn. She is the worst heroine there is. She is obviously the goddess of war and a pampered little princess, but she has experienced ups and downs. She carries secrets that she does not want to tell anyone, and does not trust her family's ability to help her solve her difficulties. She has to endure everything by herself. The male protagonist Si Yan also had a bumpy growth journey, licking his life on a knife's edge every day, and carrying a blood feud. Although he was doted on by his mother and concubine when he was a child, he had no choice but to grow up quickly due to the various schemes and frame-ups around him. From this point of view, it seems that the heroine and the male protagonist match up well, but I am starting to look forward to what kind of plot arrangements there will be for these two Beijingers. I found that the female and male counterparts also had such difficult characters. Perhaps in the war-torn era, everyone had a mission to survive and become a latecomer. The various obstacles faced by Ye Qianmu and Sui Gaolang are not very noticeable in this environment. In the current novel environment, this plot and character setting have a tragic tone. Of course, it is also a special feature that distinguishes it from other online novels. It is also a test for the author. After all, many people read books without thinking. The plot is quite special, and the language and psychological portrayal of the characters are well controlled. However, the author needs to pay more attention to the handling of small details: for example, when the heroine was misunderstood by her father, and Emperor Guangde, as the head of a country, could not control himself, he personally beat up the little daughter he once loved so much. After the heroine was treated by her brothers, "It has not been 24 hours since this happened" "Big brother, second brother, the operation is over"... Etc. Pay attention to the wording of these small details, because the appearance of these inappropriate words weakens the appeal of the overall article. You can pay attention to this if it needs to be modified later by the author. Of course, the heroine has gone through so much and even joined the secret guard organization. I hope that in the plot that turns around later, the author can prevent the heroine from being as miserable as the male protagonist. At the same time, he also needs to arrange the storyline in a more reasonable and appropriate way. I wrote so many of my own superficial opinions after reading the book today. It is definitely not to discredit or attack the author. I saw that the author's ideas and writing style are different from others. I cherish talents and want to see the author improve more, so I left a message. If the above words are wrong, please forgive me.
We will start updating normally from tomorrow, my dears.
It brings me to tears. I feel so sorry for the fifth princess. What obsession makes her persist?
It's so cruel, I can't stand it at all, and I'm bursting into tears
Hello, Mr. Wulan~ I'm here to visit you. Today is also a day of working hard on coding~ Good night, go to bed early and don't be tired.
Friends (๑°3°๑), I'm back and starting to update
I'm going to get my hair permed today and I won't update since I have a dinner tonight. I'll update as usual tomorrow, hehe.
What a strong desire for revenge that made Emperor Guangde so ruthless to his daughter
I don't believe it was the queen who ordered Wan Feng to kill her. Someone must have framed her.
The emotional scenes between Ye Qianmu and Sui Gaolang are also quite sad.