Different Cultivation Stories

In fact, I have quite a lot of manuscripts, more than one million words, so I should keep updating around 5,000 words every day.

Come on (✪▽✪)! Be the first to cheer

Last night, the first fan of this book, 'Book Friends 58762309', read the first few chapters from the beginning, which should have hinted me to update more. The first fan's requirements must be met. There will be two updates today, and another chapter will be posted at 2 pm.

I really like Da Da's writing style, keep up the good work Da Da

The data is indeed far different from my expectations, so I can only update it once a day. Keep up the data. If you think it looks good, you might as well leave a message to encourage me.

I came across your book accidentally and read the first few chapters because of the words in your introduction. As a middle-aged man, I understand your stubbornness. I have been reading books for many years, and as an old bookworm, I also understand some of the rules of the online literary circle. It is true that it is very difficult for new authors to attract readers, especially in Zongheng, whose traffic is far from the starting point. The overall story is good and the writing is good, but there are many problems. First of all, I think the biggest problem is that the name of the book is not attractive enough. A good name is really important for a new book. To be honest, "Different Cultivation Stories", it is difficult to arouse readers' interest just by looking at this name. I think it would be much better if it could be changed to a name that is both relevant and attractive enough. Secondly, as you said yourself, you had to write it according to this setting because of the censorship, which really affected the readers' perception. Because I haven't seen much, I don't have much say. However, I think cultivation + modern background can also be written, as long as there is a good story core. I recommend you to read Mao Ni's "The Legend of Suzaku" and "Jian Ke". The former is about cultivation + modernity, and the latter is about cultivation + future. I think his writing and layout have certain reference significance for you to write this kind of article. Finally, as an old man, I would like to say: Come on, let's encourage each other.

Come on, check in every day

Looking at these things I wrote a year ago, I felt good about myself at the beginning, at least it was deeper than the routine and cool articles produced by the assembly line. Who knew what would happen if it was published online now? There are still more than 500,000 words and 100 chapters left, so keep throwing it out.

In fact, the writing is pretty good, and the author has quite a lot of experience, but the setting is a bit too stiff. Modern people, modern objects, and modern plots are paired with the ancient imperial court, which makes it an indescribable pleasure to read. Is this necessary? Also, the girl talks too much and the plot seems to be dragging.

Maybe I posted it in the wrong category, fantasy readers don't like modern plots. It's a pity that I don't know how to write in a circular way to defeat monsters, so it will be cool if it's cool. Give yourself a song "Liangliang".