I Am the Male Protagonist, Please Save Me!

I want to make one thing clear, and that is to say that I watched it from beginning to end. The overall tone of this book is more funny and imaginative, but maybe in order to be funny, uh, I found some logic and the coherence of the whole story in each chapter of each world. Well, it may be that the last story of his is still amazing to me, but the next story, if the beginning of his story makes me uninterested, I may abandon this book if I ask? And it can also be seen that there may be a little bit of talent being exhausted. It can be seen that the early foreshadowing is not good, and there is no main line running through it till now. Come on, barbecue. The main reason is that each character serves the purpose of plot and comedy, so it seems relatively routine, and the template has no soul, so it may be a tool for the story. If the character needs to have a certain amount of emotion, a certain number of fans, and a certain amount of mobility to make it more attractive, we suggest adding some scenes from the heroine's perspective to people from all perspectives and worlds. In fact, the problem in the early stage is not that big, because it is a kind of comedy in itself, and people are very tolerant of comedy. However, there is another problem, which is that it is easy to get separated. For example, there is a certain sense of division between the front and the back. Well, I prefer the chapters in a certain world, but I don't like the chapters in the second world, so I might abandon it halfway. And for this type of article, you may have read two chapters at first, and then you will feel very fresh, but if you gradually read on, it is actually just for fun. It does not have that kind of emotion, nor the charm of the characters, and there are no more attractive points. It is just for fun. Then there may be too many chapters that make it easy for the author to get stuck in his writing, which may lead to a bad impression for readers. Having a sense of division is a big problem. Tianlan has a suggestion here. If you clarify the main line, create characters, and try to be funny. Have a good rest, sort out the plot, don't force comedy just for the sake of being funny, don't force progress just for the sake of water, I speak from the bottom of my heart.

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