An Onmyoji’s Journey in Another World

It's good overall, but it's too short. It's gone before the novice village is released. At least it can be written to about 10 million words. It's good to watch, but it's gone before you know it. Diluting 3 million words to 10 million words won't be so rushed. The protagonist is only 16 years old in the finale. The protagonist started to travel around the world when he was 4 years old. It's too young. The time events in it are very urgent. Time is rushing at every turn. In the past few days, Hakuba It's been more than half a month, and there are still a lot of gaps that haven't been filled in, and a lot of things haven't been written, such as the Dual Realm, the Three Yuan Realm, and the One Yuan Realm continent where the protagonist is, and the finale has not been released. Hey, there are many continents in the One Yuan Realm, and each continent is also very large and has many imperial sects. It's equivalent to writing a continent story. It's a pity that the author said that the results are not good. I think it is quite good. It is a book that I rarely finish, so the rating does not mean that the book is not good.

What the hell do you keep writing about three years old? ?