I'm Timid in Journey to the West, but I Throw Punches Across the Heavens

In just over a hundred chapters, the saint has almost all the housekeeping treasures, and then few of them are really useful. He keeps saying that I want people from the ancient times to go to other worlds to make profits for me. No, you are a true immortal, what is the point of doing all this? As soon as you arrive, you don't need anything, so why are you jumping around? What benefit is greater than the spiritual treasure of a saint? Are you still following the path when your brain is a mess?

So-so, overall. The theme is quite well conceived. As the true immortal boss in the group, he should absorb the resources of all realms to enrich himself and then improve himself. . . It's a pity that the author is so watery that he has no friends. .

It's too verbose. Do not enter the sinkhole.

Chat group + All Heavens and Worlds, obviously a cool fan article This is the first time I saw someone writing about bureaucracy in a chat group

This article is about running to the ends of the earth, so I can change its name to "The Interpretation of the Fengshen Bang"

The subject matter is okay, but it's too wordy and I can't stand it.

You pretend to be like an old lady crossing the street, you are so stupid and tough, and you have a special praise for it, you might as well write about the evil smile of the Dragon King

The subject matter is good, but it's watery and messy

The subject matter is good. The sea is all water, and it is still an ultra-low-end version of heaven.