Douluo: After Bibi Dong Was Abused and Raised, Gu Yuena Took Care of Her

The author has been laying the groundwork for a long time just to get the big share behind. As expected, Douluo fans are all shit, haha

How should I put it, demolishing the east wall to make up for the west wall, the explanation of things is not clear, the logic is also problematic, and the pace is really dragging. Just like Chasing Wife Crematorium, the protagonist is also a talent. I always thought that I couldn't make up my mind. Revenge is the most important thing. There are more typos. After Bibi Dong beats Qian Renxue, it's really hard to hold back.

It's okay in the front, but it's getting more and more embarrassing in the back. If I thought he was good-looking before, now he's just average.

It's a bit lame at the front. It's actually pretty good. The back is a little ugly. But I'll still give you my monthly pass. Come on, author.

Fortunately, this book is here. If it were published elsewhere, it would be a problem whether anyone would read it. I can write twenty pages of foreshadowing. After I finish writing, I will foreshadow it again, and after I finish it, I will continue to foreshadow it. What's the use? I don't understand why this book's rating is over nine points

The beginning is very cruel

The author portrays each character in a very three-dimensional, detailed, and vivid way. The tragedy is also very sympathetic, and there is also a desire that makes it easy to watch. It is very interesting. All in all, I should be able to give it a high score of 9.8 Or 9.7.

It almost made me cry.

After reading more than 160 chapters, I usually don't comment much, but this time I really couldn't stand it. It was very good in the early stage, but after leaving the Star Forest, things started to go wrong, and there were a lot of typos. Let's talk about Gu Yuena's search for the protagonist first. Can't she sense the bloodline? She still has to keep looking for something to pave the way for her. What is the foreshadowing? At first, after Bibi Dong gave birth to the child, she asked the protagonist and Qian Renxue to stay with Bibi Dong for 3 years. The protagonist was constantly targeted, and Qian Daoliu didn't come to see her even once? Qian Xunji will only ask the protagonist if he is okay here, but he won't ask the servants and so on. Qian Renxue is also like an unruly young lady. Are you right with the original work? Although it is a fanfic, you have exaggerated the personalities of other characters. It feels like you are trying to reduce intelligence here. There are also Gu Yuena's skills, such as fire, burning them, water and so on. There is no need for this in the original work, just these water, fire and so on. I don't know how many words have been lost in water. Also, before Qian Daoliu found the protagonist, Snake Spear and Agatha told everything. After Qian Daoliu found the protagonist, would he not know that he was the Dark Angel? Don't you find it contradictory? When Shrek ate the fairy grass, he never mentioned that Dugu Bo had captured Tang San or anything. Before the start of the Soul Master Competition, he said that Tang San took the fairy grass back and took it. Did Ning Rongrong take the fairy grass or the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda? Did the fat man take fairy grass or evil fire phoenix? In the original book, Tang San seemed to be 43 or 44 when he participated in the Soul Master Competition. Did you write 42 here?

Have the minds of everyone behind you been invaded by Oita elements?