Pursuing the Dao, Everlasting

Why is it written like a running account... I read hundreds of chapters and kept calculating accounts... I really can't stand this style.

A person practices qi, absorbs some spiritual energy, and creates a Hongmeng purple energy. A monk absorbs spiritual energy. If it is not needed, he can create a five-element essence? Needed for refining. If you find a traitor who betrayed your clan, you still won't kill him, how can you be so gentle? If the family is poor, the family elders, alchemists, etc. Will be willing to build the foundation and die if there is no hope! Deliberately imitating immortality, but the logic is confusing, the family deliberately kills the goose to get the eggs, borrows 8,000 spiritual stones to buy the foundation order, has no money to pay back, sells the magic weapon?

The author is talented, think about the readers' expectations

The plot is good and worth reading

Top ideas! ! ! Very nice book! ! !

There are a lot of typos and small mistakes everywhere. The combat power in the back is also broken, there is a harem, and there is a lot of nonsense about fighting. The author always wants the protagonist to show off, such as playing the piano in the rain. Isn't this pure glory? There is also the heroine Jiang Linglong, who was already in the late stage of the Zifu at that time and actually fell in love with a protagonist who was only in the foundation stage. Mainly because she fell in love with him for no reason, and it always felt weird to read. She always talked about the old patriarch and so on. It felt like an NPC, and it felt like the previous one was okay. The later stage is a mess

I was dissatisfied when I saw the section about Chen Nianxu's foundation-building elixir in more than 100 chapters. Chen Nianxu was originally ranked first for the Foundation Establishment Pill, and the preparations for the Foundation Establishment were all complete, but he just missed the last step. As a result, a woman suddenly offered him a Black Iron Ore, so he could jump in and get it first. You have to say that before the Foundation Establishment Pill came to the family, this woman had already donated the black iron ore, so with this contribution, she could indeed be ranked ahead of Chen Nianxu. But she was just trying to grab supplies temporarily, and she really succeeded in jumping in line. This family must really behave this way. Then everyone usually doesn't tell their family what resources they discover. Even if they can't develop them now, they keep them secretly and wait until they or their descendants are able to develop them. Once valuable materials appear in the family, then donate them when the time comes. Anyway, donating early is the same as donating late. In the end, you can get it first. If everyone can learn from it, can such a family really grow? You want to say that this Foundation Establishment Pill originally belonged to you, Chen Nianzhi, and you can give it to whoever you want, so why bother pretentiously arranging your contribution?

The plot is bland and feels a bit like a running story. I originally thought it would be a single female protagonist, so I decided to just watch it. In fact, no female protagonist is the best. After reading more than 500 chapters, I realized that Yaya was attracted by the Six Desire Demon Banner, and then the male protagonist accepted her, and it became multiple female protagonists. To be honest, it is very abrupt that the protagonist goes to the far north ice field to look for Yaya, because the family only has 3 Yuan Yings in the early stage, but there are 4 spiritual roots of heaven and earth. Isn't the protagonist afraid that the family will be destroyed in the process of searching for Yaya? I finally understand why this book is not popular. It is difficult for books with female protagonists to become popular, but in the end, there are multiple female protagonists, and the plot is very abrupt. I wonder if the Xianyan from the family will also be accepted later? I don't care anymore, I don't want to continue reading anyway

It's not bad, you can read it if you are short of books, it is worth recommending!

The plot is good and the writing is smooth. Chang has read more than 900 chapters.