The Vicious Female Nomata Is in Shura Field Every Day

It seems to be a story about a female protagonist, but in fact it is purely patriarchal, and because it seems to improve the status of women, it is not, which is even more disgusting.

How to put it, the heroine has a mother who has been bad to her since she was a child. Her mother was caught cheating and was hunted down by her father. Then the heroine's system must have the heroine save her mother, so the heroine went, and then the mother dragged the heroine off the cliff. I just asked, whose plot do you think is good or not?

It's not bad. It feels like the heroine has been giving birth to a baby all the time. It's so painful. When she gave birth for the second time, the system even increased the pain. I don't know why, I just feel that the male protagonist's favorability towards the female protagonist is artificially high (personal feeling)

I think it's quite interesting and it's fun to write.

I feel that the outline is not written, or that I often write half of this and then suddenly want to write something else... Which leads to confusion in the plot and characters... Even if the characters collapse at the beginning, the plot will take a turn for the worse in the middle... Let's talk about the character issue first. The heroine is set to be a boss with level 7 superpowers who has survived the apocalypse. According to the theory, the character should be calm, smart, independent and calm... It starts to fall apart after just a few chapters... Completely dependent on the system, brainless and especially concerned about the appearance... I can understand the fragile psychology of the modern past... It is really outrageous that the psychology of surviving in the apocalypse is so fragile. The male protagonists are also very uncomfortable... It makes people feel lustful and lustful... Especially the dragon that appears inexplicably in the middle... If you meet a 5-year-old female protagonist, you will not marry her if you are not the female protagonist... She is not 5 years old, she is 5 years old... Is there a report button? By the way, there is another setting that I really can't complain about... The female protagonist is menstruating... Then the setting is that the female protagonist knows how to use sanitary napkins and knows that she is menstruating. When the system says that this is the time when female charm is maximized and the estrogens are released, which is especially suitable to seduce the male protagonist... She will seduce the male protagonist without hesitation...? ? ? No? ? ? Running a red light, brother... The heroine completely accepts it well? How old is the author's male and female? This setting... Is really... Outrageous The second is the plot problem... Too many elements are superimposed... It is also the background of the post-apocalyptic time travel, and there is a system guide with super powers... Then work hard on the super power system... In the middle, suddenly I couldn't think of it and a wood spirit root cultivator jumped out... I felt that the imperial city was not enough, and suddenly opened a previous sect... No...? ? ? Transformed from the world of beasts into cultivating immortals... Is this how you transfer... You might as well open 2 books... I saw that 50% of them were transformed into the immortal system and turned into a villain heroine. She failed a mission and was so ugly that she had a psychological breakdown. The plot and character completely collapsed... I couldn't bear it anymore... I withdrew...

The characters are clear, the plot is exciting, and some of the writing is good. I also agree with the negative comments of some book friends in the comments. I can only say that this book cannot be written to everyone's satisfaction. Those who can accept the author's realistic style of writing about the evil of people and beasts will think this book is pretty good, somewhere between good and average. I read this book in five days. The plot I remember is relatively coherent. I think this book is relatively well-written. From the heroine competing with the time-travelers and being reborn and being hated by the orcs, to the heroine leading the tribe to prosperity, the beastman cubs were not left behind during this period. Most of the main characters who appeared have complete backgrounds and are beyond the imagination of the readers. I can really feel that the author has definitely sorted out this book. The review is very complex. There are the heroine's confusion when facing the world of beasts, the despair of difficulties, the joy of success, and the unyielding face of the strong; Bai Qi's regret and heartache at being bewitched; the cuteness of the children and the joy of being alone when they grow up or choosing to travel around the mountains and rivers... What upset me the most was that Bai Hu sacrificed himself for the love of his life, killing orcs, and "injured himself all over". However, towards the end, from the perspective of the heroine and the male protagonist, he accidentally met Bai Hu. At this time, he had already chosen to let go of his attachment. I felt that the scene of wandering around the world of beasts to help others was too magical. This may be the best ending for a genius boy to change his ways after going astray. The plot designed by the author is, of course, very good and perfect. Some of the fragments are too overemphasized and seem a bit superfluous. Some of them are too fond of describing the scenery. Most of the fragments described are very ordinary and some of them I can't understand the purpose of describing the scenery. However, the author's skill is obvious and readers can feel that there is a lot of space. He treats the work very responsibly. I look forward to great progress here.

I got goosebumps when I saw it, and I was also embarrassed by Beast Shiwen

It's a very old character design, the heroine is average, and the characterization is not deep. I would have thought it looked good 10 years ago, but it doesn't look good now.

We just can't say it, I just like it

The heroine has been trying to please the hero