Transmigrated to the Past: I Became a Big Shot with the Sign-In System!

Overall, just take a look. There are a lot of typos, and some people also appear inexplicably. I really don't understand. Every time I first think that the rest will be uneventful. . There will be evil people or something like that. . It pissed me off. There are also some chapters where the heroine feels aggrieved. The heroine studies cooking and other skills all day long, and she has never learned martial arts. Every time something happens, I don't know why it just goes unchecked. It makes me so frustrated.

If you haven't seen the sign-in system, you can take a look. The story line is divided into several ends, and all of them are pretty good. The plot is gentle and has a comfortable and warm style. The low rating may be related to poor reading caused by too many typos and too few words. The author's lack of dividing lines in the novel's paragraphs will also make it difficult to read. It's still pretty good to be patient and watch the flaws.

The first part is exciting, but the second part is just filling in the numbers with allusions. Many places are mentioned in one stroke, no, half-written, and unclear. The latter plot is really allusive, buried in unofficial history, and marked as anticlimactic.

Nice

The writing is very good, but the ending is too hasty, which is a pity. I still want to see the male and female protagonists travel through time.

The eldest son of the family is much younger than the younger one, and the reborn male and female protagonists are too cautious, and they also feel stingy! And Goldfinger is still like this.