She Steals a Kiss from Her Brooding Stepbrother, and He Gets Addicted

I feel that the writing is quite good, but I don't know why the flow is not good. The plot is also relatively novel, not the traditional and cliche plot. The whole story is quite good, except for the emotional feeling at the beginning, which is not very clear and smooth. But the whole thing is very well written. The characters gradually emerged in the later stages.

After watching it, I feel very emotional why I didn't watch it earlier, which would have helped to prevent it from being censored by the platform due to poor traffic. TAT... The plot is very gripping. It gave me goosebumps several times, and I lamented the emotional pull between Yu Chen and Su Zhiyu. I was deceived by the title and introduction, but I found that the author's writing was unexpectedly delicate. Whether it is the creation of the characters or the plot, the sour feeling of the brother and sister gradually warming up but pushing each other away again and again because of the heavy fate they bear, can be seen from the author's careful polishing. It's a pity that I can't watch the second phase. In fact, when I read it with the beginning and introduction, I was very curious about how these two people who took relationships seriously in their own way in their respective fields turned into the person who joked about the crematorium in the introduction. The more I read, the less connected they became. It was only at the end that I realized that... It may be that the outline was cut for the sake of completion, but it feels like a pity. I really want to see the real story of the author's brother and sister's development. The current ending seems to tell them all the truth in one go, forcing them to have no barriers. It feels very fast and there is no development process. It always feels like something is missing. But no matter how you say it, I think this is a very high-quality story, full of the protagonist's strong emotions and their own persistence. I would like to rate it as 70% acidity and 30% sweetness ~ I hope to see the author continue writing it one day!!

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