Pregnant Village Girl Joins the Army; After the Divorce, the Commander Is Red-Eyed

The writing is messy. Chapter 5 is about the heroine delivering the baby to the dog of the heroine's prospective third sister-in-law's family. Chapter 27 is about bringing fetal protection medicine to the heroine's prospective third sister-in-law's dog.

It looks good, but there are too few updates.

I read it earlier and there were a lot of typos! But I just want to know the ending of the heroine. It's outrageous. I feel like I wrote it just for the sake of writing. The hero's mother had a good relationship with the hero, but the ending was emotionless. She tortured the hero for the sake of her daughter. There are many problems with this book.

Really, Yuanyuan, Xia Qianyan, Zheng Hao, the life experiences of the three of them are too mysterious, please reveal them quickly

The overall plot is well set up, but the details sometimes fail to withstand scrutiny. It's quite confusing sometimes.

Xia Qianyan is so happy jumping around! There is nothing to write about, is that reasonable? No matter which era a clown can go to heaven and earth, and control heaven and earth, whether he wants money or power, is everyone in the book dead? You can imagine it out of thin air, but it has to be normal. It can be a little outrageous, but not too outrageous, right? Didn't write it hard

I'll leave this story alone. The first half is beautiful. However, I personally found the plot after Huo Chu's divorce to be boring and dragging. After the reform and opening up, some new roles were added. After that, I was surrounded by these characters all the time. Some of the previous pitfalls, such as the Xia family, the treasure map, etc., Were ignored and completely separated from the character plot in the first half. The first half is exciting, but the second half is not. The second half really doesn't appeal to me anymore. The finale also ended so hastily. It really made my evaluation of this book fall from good to average.

Seeing speechless

I don't understand what I'm writing about. I'm writing about being together with the male protagonist and having no heirs. I'm also writing about having several sons and then stealing someone else's daughter to take him back. What kind of good brother's baby is this? The writing is too immature and it's okay to pass the time.

Brainless and loved by everyone, the writing is immature...