After a Flash Marriage Between Rivals, the Boss Became Addicted to Coaxing Babies

I've read almost 100 chapters and I feel pretty good so far. The male protagonist seems a bit sweet in his speech and seems to be upright. I just feel like the male and female protagonists could interact more and the female protagonist's sister could write less.

What age is it and still the concept of water thrown away by a married daughter is inculcated throughout the entire text? . .

It looks good, I just hope the author will finish it soon

I really can't help it, there are a lot of typos, and readers have caught them and still won't correct them.

The plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos

There are a lot of typos. Feedback. Isn't the author going to correct them?

It doesn't look good! The heroine's sister writes more than the heroine

The price of the clothes in the hostess's store can be changed. There should not be a set of 150 in the wholesale market. After all, she was once a young lady. Even if she opens a clothing store, she must have a little bit of class.

I think it's okay but it's too wordy. A day in the novel takes about 6 to 7 chapters, and there are too few chapters about the male and female protagonists. They all talk about other people.

There are too many words written about the heroine and sister, and there are many typos