She Goes to the Capital Pregnant to Divorce, and the General Bows His Head to Soothe Her

What a fun article to write. Why haven't you commented yet? This heroine is like a piece of meat. No one in this village dared to mess with her, and the villagers compared her to a village bully who weighed 150 pounds. Independent, self-reliant, and not romantic-minded, it is really worth watching.

I have read more than 30 chapters in total, so let me comment first. Advantages: The subject matter is good, but there are too many shortcomings. First, there is a problem with character creation. Is the son of the Zhou family who is a soldier the heroine's elder brother or younger brother? In the first chapter, the author writes about the elder brother, but in the latter part, the son claims that the heroine is her sister. I really can't figure out whether he is the elder brother or the younger brother. The character creation of the male protagonist is also a mess, at least in terms of appearance and dialogue, and there is no description of the characteristics of the male protagonist. Also, the various characters around the heroine are extremely flat, without any foreshadowing, and it feels purely disgusting, rather than describing the character from a third-party perspective. The second question is whether the author has written too many short stories in the past. The plot has very poor coherence. The heroine and her sister were tied to the ancestral hall, and the process of untying them was not seen. This is in line with the fast pace of short stories, but not in line with the foreshadowing of a full-length novel. Third, the entire writing style is not very good. This is the first time I read the author's novel. There is no character arc at all, and there is very little psychological description. It makes people confused and the writing power is insufficient. I hope the author can work hard!

This plot feels very witty, and the heroine is also hard to explain.

The female protagonist will only swallow her anger when something happens, and the male protagonist and his family are not good people either. All the people in the family compound are evil people, have unhealthy outlooks, and are morally kidnapped.

Speechless, in the 1980s, prices were easily 500 or 1,000 yuan. Should the author first understand the prices in the past before writing?

Do you describe the army and officers and soldiers as a mess? ... What did you write? Just making things up🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

How can I put it this way? The plot of the book is quite good and eye-catching, but the family members and leaders of the military hospital have incorrect views. The more they read, the more they couldn't stand it and they abandoned the book.

It's just a female video without any logic, it seems like everything is making way for this

Messy The plot is confusing, exaggerated and illogical

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