After Signing in for 800 Years, I Became the Peerless Swordsman

The early part is okay, a bit verbose but well written, but the later part is really speechless. The name of the book is "Sign in for 800 Years and I Will Become a Peerless Sword Immortal". There is a sign-in system at the beginning. Does the protagonist sign in after he ascends? The core of the story has deteriorated after I wrote it. I can only say that the author is really yours.

Not bad

Nice

All very good

No wonder the rating is so low, there's so much nonsense

What the hell, cool writing is not satisfying at all. I am afraid of being a girl-controller. I am afraid. This kind of writing is not popular at all in the current fantasy novel literary world. It can be said to be a relatively bad writing. I have read more than 70 pages of the whole book and I can no longer stand it. I feel that the protagonist's aura is around the little girl. The opening chapter is still... Yes, but I have hidden my identity for too long. It is unnecessary. My own people have done it the same way. There is no foreshadowing behind it. It is just like a short article. This makes me, who likes to read cool articles, a little uncomfortable and even anxious. It is okay to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. But you can come out and pretend to be a B when you are ready. It is too mysterious. (Comrades who like to read cool articles, pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, this book can be crossed out. If you can't read more than 100 chapters at most, you don't want to read it. The above is just my personal opinion. If I offend the author, I'm sorry)

It's okay if you like your sister to write more. The fantasy novels are well written, but there's a problem if you keep making insinuations about the Sui and Tang dynasties!

What the hell is this mess?

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