The Fiancé She Loves so Much Is Bai Yueguang's Substitute

It's a pity. It's a subject I like, but the writing is lacking.

Not good-looking

The theme and setting are good, but the plot is common and stale. In the end, the heroine got together with her first love It's a pity that Mr. Mo In addition, the writing style is average, and the characters throughout the book are not all the same IQ and are inconsistent, and the characters created are just templates...

The names are confusing with each other. I only read it because of its subject matter. Later on, its character image was a bit broken. I have seen other men in double-substitute stories. It is not just Bai Yueguang whose face looks like the heroine. He has his own characteristics and is smarter. And the man here is a bit too stupid. His actions make people feel like he is just cannon fodder. Even the female partner is a little smarter than this man. Moreover, the man's behavior makes people feel that he is not from a wealthy family and feels uneducated (personal opinion, for reference only)

I'm very disappointed. Although it's a subject I like, the writing is not very good. I couldn't stand it and felt a little irritated. I skipped watching it. It's really annoying that Jiang Mengyao keeps bouncing around. The same goes for the heroine, who is always being plotted against. She is the daughter of the Shi family. What's so difficult about dealing with an actress in the entertainment industry? It just happened to prevent Jiang Mengyao from being forced to death. There were some illogical points in the process. The heroine's best friend Liu Qian had obviously had a picnic with Chu Xiaohan before. Later, when the heroine was kidnapped for the first time, it was written that it was the first time she met Chu Hanxiao. Moreover, Liu Qian is also a bit broken. Starting from the first time the heroine was kidnapped, the subsequent portrayal of her by the author does not match the previous description of her character, and there is a feeling of separation. Also, it was clearly mentioned earlier that Liu Qian's grandfather was a general, and later it was said that her family was not as wealthy as the Shi family. I don't quite understand it. The author may not know much about the general's status. Generally, businessmen with red backgrounds are less likely to mess with him. Moreover, the general is almost the top leader in the military. His descendants must have a smooth journey in business, and others must give some face. All in all, this article did not meet my expectations. There are quite a few flaws. I hope the author will continue to work hard to create better works.