Every Day After I Transmigrated, I Worked Hard to Keep the Baby

Although it is very fantasy, it is still very beautiful. The female protagonist is too difficult, and the male protagonist is not easy either. They are both protagonists who can die at any time. With the unremitting efforts of the heroine, Zai Zai was finally born, and the hero detoxified, which was more than just a difficult word.

I have read more than 80 chapters to comment. Let me give you some general reasons: 1: After the heroine rehabilitated her grandfather and father, she did not change her surname. The surname Zhuang belongs to the enemy who destroyed the family. 2: The Crown Prince has the merits of a great virtuous man in ten generations. The heroine is blinded every time she sees him. But every time the Crown Prince appears as a hidden bandit and wears a mask, the heroine cannot see the merits. 3: There are so many typos that you have to guess a lot, which greatly reduces your reading experience. To sum up: I personally feel that the author has no outline and starts writing as soon as he picks up the pen, because the origin of each new character is explained after he appears, and there are no ambush lines.

It's super nice, except for a few typos.

There are just too many typos!

When I read Chapter 112, I felt that it was not in line with my three views. There was no result in the banker's case, and there was no follow-up after the whole family was gone. The only follow-up was to be chased and killed. The three views of the heroine in Chapter 112 were equally unbearable to watch. The heroine watched Seeing the massacre of enemy troops, she began to doubt whether her counterattack was right or wrong. The law of heaven judged right and wrong without looking at the reasons, only looking at lives and casualties. Like the laws of her dynasty, it destroyed the three views. Although the world has always been like this, as a novel, I still want the world to be clear.

There are too many typos, which makes people look off-color.

There are too many typos and some of them don't make sense.

This book is very well written. The plot is particularly exciting. It's just that this younger brother is too clingy, has no ability and is stubborn, causing trouble everywhere.

The plot is generally good, but the wording is not that good. You can guess other people's typos at a glance, but this can directly lead to mistakes. Moreover, there are not so many typos, and the plot is repeated several times, making it difficult to describe it in one sentence.

The plot is very good... But there are too many typos... Some of which I really can't guess what they mean... So I skipped a bit to read the ending and then gave up😰