The General Seeks a Phoenix

As a time-traveling heroine, there is no cliche about opening a Q building, selling skin care products, opening a modern snack restaurant and other modern industries. The heroine Yun Xi is really doing things that were unique to that era. If she hadn't asked the male protagonist the word "China" for the first time and occasionally mentioned how many years have passed since she came here, you wouldn't know she is a time traveler. Just this is worthy of praise. In addition, the author does not describe too much about the characters who are not very important. Even the treatment is dealt with in a few strokes. The plot is very compact. In addition, I read in the comments that some people complained about the suddenness of the emotional line. Later, the heroine was in a coma and the hero was talking about it carefully. You can check it out! It's a bit nonsensical to complain about the extra story, because the extra story is about the love and understanding between the male protagonist's parents. The only thing that bothered me was that there were a lot of typos in the second half, but I could still understand it and it didn't have a big impact. Overall, this novel is worth reading! Don't describe the scenery too much, don't write too much about irrelevant people. Even if it's a major event, I don't write it at the time and then summarize it after the matter is over. Although there are no details of the process, I can understand it without being confused. The heroine has no bad love, and she has no ambiguity with anyone other than the hero. There are one or two dark flowers. The peach blossoms of love for the female protagonist, the female protagonist has no time to deal with, and the male protagonist is also clean around him, so they join forces, and the male protagonist is a very insecure character. Although the author did not say it, but this is how I understood it after reading it, (right or wrong depends on your feelings, please don't criticize if you have different opinions! Thank you) This book is worth recommending!

It looks good. Although the heroine has traveled through time, the traces of time travel in the plot are not deep. The heroine looks like an ancient person who was born and raised here. The plot is also quite good, there is no special plot, it is simple, there is very little about the harem battle, and the fight for relegation is not very intense. It feels like the master is writing about daily life, and the timeline jumps quite quickly. All in all, it's really good. I like the heroine's family very much, especially Twilight. They are so cute~('▽'). I really want to have the same cute little brother~

The second book of Seven Cats that completely ruined my outlook so far She actually called a ten-year-old girl her mistress! ! Help! ! It makes me sick! I've endured it until chapter 45, and I really can't stand the sentence "Mother". There are almost all the subtle points that cannot be touched when writing novels. I won't mention the typos. Every book has them. I will mention the others little by little. The biggest flaw of this book is the age of the protagonist! At the beginning, the heroine is 4 years old and the hero is 10 years old, and the drama begins! We are readers, not bts, okay, two kids are falling in love, tell me how to do it! Let's talk about the male protagonist first. 1. The male protagonist is ten years old, and he is climbing up and down the wall with a four-year-old girl; he cuts off the adult's hand with a knife to save the heroine😅😅As the author, do you want to have a little understanding of the basic abilities of human cubs before writing a novel. 2. The male protagonist is super oily! The "kitten" and the "dark voice" around Chapter 23 are so shocking to the bone! This broke my toe! My mind is filled with images of Zhang Han's clingy kitten🐮10-year-old boy really shouldn't be so oily, vomit 3. The most devastating thing is that he said "I want you" to the heroine! ! ! ! Save your life! ! ! She is only four years old, brother! ! You are only ten years old! What's going on? That's pretty much the male protagonist. There are only about a hundred chapters in the novel, and it's not that good to see the male protagonist's scenes in 45 chapters. Let's talk about the heroine 1. It can be seen that the author really wants to describe a beautiful and strong heroine, but! I only write about people around me saying how smart the heroine is, so what about it? The heroine's stupidity is vividly written! Are you okay? Anyway, in the first few chapters, the heroine fell asleep directly in the arms of the "thief"? I'm really speechless. I'm not in good health, but I went out in the middle of the night wearing only my underwear to plot against others. After I finished plotting, I just slept in the arms of a 10-year-old boy😅😅 2. Every sentence says that the heroine is smart, and every sentence describes the heroine as stupid and abnormal. Not to mention that Chu Yan and the second prince are the same person. Do you think a prince will be the servant of a charlatan? What kind of brain is this? 3. I feel like I'm being serious. When I was four years old, I said, "It seems like I've been too comfortable these past four years." Do you think she's going to step up her game? No, she lived comfortably for another six years. When she was four years old, the second wife who harmed her mother had a nightmare, saying that "the game has just begun." Six years later, she was basking in the sunshine and felt that she had no regrets in her life. The second wife was still the second wife, and it took six years to find evidence of the murder ten years ago. It was still too troublesome. Let's stop talking about the characters here. What sticks out about this book: 1. The logic does not make sense: The heroine follows her demoted father to the county guard, but is bullied by others. Then the heroine said that she was the county head personally appointed by the emperor, and those people backed down. . . . 😅Shouldn't those people know her identity earlier? It's not like she was granted the title of County Lord quietly. Since those people would take this into account, they would not give her authority. Since they gave her authority, it means they would not care about her identity. If the heroine wants to turn this game around, shouldn't she show some real skills? She didn't, so she just revealed her identity, and then the villain gave way😅😅Why are you not the county leader if you don't say anything? Are you talking about the county boss? Is it her identity or her mouth that the villain is afraid of? 2. No common sense: Not to mention that a ten-year-old boy chopped off an adult's hand with a knife and carried a four-year-old girl over a wall. Comparing the identities of the heroine and her concubine, one's father is the official daughter-in-law and holds a high position, while the other's father is the concubine and is unknown; one's mother is the daughter-in-law of the general's palace and is loved by the princess, and the other's mother is not even worthy of the concubine's second son who married through connections; one is the daughter-in-law of the county owner who is favored by the emperor, and the other is as transparent as her mother. This unloved girl ran into the house of her much-loved daughter-in-law and threatened to beat her, but in the end she was able to get out unscathed. 3. The narrative has a beginning and no end: Although the girl from the above was sprinkled with something by the heroine, she was indeed unscathed at the time. It was said that the fan base was enough to make people bear it, and then it was gone. . Where's the tail? No 4. People can't set it up: The heroine is smart and beautiful, but? No more to say 5. Typesetting description: There is almost no description technique or level, it is all parallelism. People don't come out gradually and slowly. They all appear in front of the reader in one fell swoop, making you have to go back and read halfway through. Who is this person? Why don't you have any impression? Can't remember people at all Finally, an old problem. Readers can accept that the protagonist is strong, but they cannot accept that the intelligence of the people around them is used in exchange for the protagonist's strength. After reading Chapter 45 so far, except for the hero and heroine, everyone else has something in their head. Can you bring it in? No matter how smart a ten-year-old child is, no adult will leave all the moving and other matters to her, right? The heroine's parents are like idiots. They have to discuss everything with the heroine and rely on her for everything. Moving house, fighting for medicine... Even finding a teacher for her son requires a ten-year-old heroine to do it. Mom had been poisoned for two days, and dad could only wait for his daughter to come back, but the doctors he called didn't work. When my daughter came back, she knew the antidote and asked her to find the medicine herself. She almost passed by. The heroine who had to lie down for three days to catch the night breeze only needed three days of sleep to fight with a wolf😅😅When I needed it, I remembered that she was not in good health, and when she didn't need it, she could go to places you couldn't go to, including heaven and earth. It can be said that there shouldn't be so many flaws. Many things can be rationalized by people who are fifteen or sixteen years old. Why must the protagonist be so young? If you want to write about a lot of things that happened between them, just add a few more years and push it back a few years. Why do you want to reduce it forward? Why are you getting married two years too late, right? 😅

Good

I gave up after reading a few chapters. A four-year-old child cannot adapt to the description of an ambiguous relationship.

I started writing it from the birth of the heroine. The story is too long. After reading dozens of chapters, I just selected a few to read the ending. The heroine in this book has nothing special except for her adult insights and beauty. Almost every chapter emphasizes the heroine's outstanding appearance and noble character. Such a story has no connotation. If you find a good book, there is really no need to read this book!

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The heroine is weak, doesn't she know how to find a way?

Well written

After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that it was unreasonable to boast, and the heroine's aura was too dazzling. I feel like the author's framework cannot be filled with enough content... But seeing that the reviews are quite high, I thought it would get better later on, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I felt uncomfortable reading it. The rhetoric is gorgeous and the content is not rich enough. Abandoned. (Personal opinion only)