The Feisty Girl of the Eighties: Marrying a Veteran and Building a Fortune

A very rough novel that cares about details~ First of all, there are countless typos, even the names of people are wrong, the last name is wrong within a few sentences, and the first name is also wrong in various ways. Secondly, it is difficult to form words and sentences in one sentence, and the writing style is not good. "It ended in less than an hour..." Does the author mean to express it quickly or slowly? The heroine should not be worried if the mistress wants to seduce him. The author wrote that the heroine is not jealous. Shouldn't the mistress be jealous of the heroine who gets the hero... In the end, it was full of loopholes. The heroine's character in her previous life was sometimes submissive, and sometimes she was a very egotistical heroine. The heroine has vomited countless times, and she also wrote that she always thought morning sickness would never happen... The heroine's medical skills are sometimes good and sometimes bad. Sometimes she can tell when she takes a pulse instantly. She even soaked in ice water many years ago. Sometimes she doesn't even know she is pregnant when she is sleepy and has morning sickness (it is extremely obvious, and she was pregnant in her previous life, and she was always uncomfortable and refused to let the doctor around her check it out). A child with a deformity can be deceived by a scumbag who says there is a way to do it (the deformity cannot be changed midway. This is common sense and the heroine is still studying medicine). After treating the father-in-law for a month, the father-in-law did not respond until he realized that he had a cold (even if the medical skills are not good, he does not have the basic skills to look, hear, ask, etc.)... My cooking skills are also said to be very good at first and then said to be almost incompetent... The heroine was not a very good person in her previous life. The scumbag she loved was her brother-in-law, and she already loved him even before the divorce. In addition, the heroine fell in love with a scumbag in her previous life, and then it was written that the heroine felt that kissing her uncle after drinking was nothing, and the uncle actually left the Ye family so hypocritically. Later, she continued to enjoy the kindness of her uncle, and considered divorcing her and marrying him... If you love someone very much, would you think it's okay to kiss someone else? Will you take advantage of other people's likes instead of keeping your distance? Do you want to marry your husband's uncle after divorce? It was also written that in the previous life, the heroine often helped to deal with the belly of a woman whose stepson made her pregnant... The heroine was killed in her previous life because she had property and someone to love her. She wanted to divorce her uncle, but she had to delay the divorce and provoke the scumbag... In short, I felt that the heroine deserved it. After the rebirth, the heroine often has long arguments with the scumbag in private, and she still compares her current position with the scumbag in her mind... It's quite disgusting. She feels like the kind of girl who has trouble falling in love, and doesn't show how decisive she is at all. Now that I have been reborn and married to someone else, what else is there to talk about? He looked like he was heartbroken and had to leave but was unwilling to do so. The same goes for the part about giving birth to a child. As mentioned earlier, the heroine wants a child very much, but when giving birth, she is always as reluctant as if she was giving birth to a child for the male protagonist. Finally, I have the freedom to leave negative reviews. If you don't agree, please leave a positive review yourself. There is no need to refute me

It's so good. Please update it soon. Write more military marriage novels. It's so good. I've read every one you write.

It looks good, can you update it more?

The plot is okay at the beginning, but a bit messy at the end. The bad guy keeps jumping around and doesn't get off the line. The heroine in the end is also made to be a bit silly, which is annoying to watch.

It's okay at the beginning, the plot is quite interesting, but when the heroine came to see the heroine from Zhazha, she was actually nine months pregnant and went to see him alone. It's not that I didn't know what happened before, but it's so easy to abandon it. It's a pity that I ignored reality and order for the sake of conflict. The first part was fine, but the second part kept dragging my hips. It was tasteless. It's a pity to abandon it. I persisted for a few chapters. Forget it, I gave up the article.

The more I read, the more speechless I became. Maybe I forgot what I wrote before. Especially when it was written later that the twins were born, the heroine said that she didn't like her children anymore because the children were crying. I gave up decisively when I saw this, and took a detour if I was concerned.

Can the heroine and the hero not be the Holy Mother? They were both bullied to such an extent that in that era, they gave 30 yuan to their enemies. . Moreover, the previous life was so miserable, but he still hasn't taken revenge in this life, Wu Yuzi,,, Ye Guosheng was actually reborn. I can't watch it.

What should I say? It's a pity that it's not the final article.

A female co-star was present throughout the whole process, and then she wrote more and more green tea🍵. I didn't order anything else, and it was just those few people jumping back and forth. In the previous chapter, I discussed having a second child, and then I talked about planning a family even if I didn't want to have one. On a June day, a child's face changes at any time? I don't see how much the female protagonist loves the male protagonist. She is also a selfish character with a rotten love story, which is weird.

Very nice😄😄😄😄😄