Ghost Doctor and Crazy Concubine Bring Disaster to the World

Very nice, the article is vivid

The content is good, but there is too much nonsense and it is tiring to read. I finished reading halfway and gave up decisively.

The plot and the development of everything are quite good, but the heroine is very verbose. Whether she is talking to someone weaker than herself or someone stronger than herself, she talks nonsense, which is a bit like a verbal essay. From my understanding, there is no need for him to talk so much. If you are a very arrogant person, it is not suitable to talk to people weaker than yourself. People who are stronger than yourself will not accept it.

There are too many typos and a lot of nonsense. It is not until the last chapter that the male protagonist meets the female protagonist in human form. The whole plot is filled with too much nonsense.

There were too many typos. One moment it was 5 years old and it looked like 3 years old because of malnutrition. Then it was 10 and it was 12 years old. It was really confusing.

There's a lot of nonsense and psychological monologues, and I haven't even finished writing this yet.

It seems that a lot has been written, but it also seems like nothing has been written. In short, there is no impression. If you are not afraid of anything, you can take a look. . .

What a mess! The preface does not match the postscript! ! ! ! !

It's not good-looking, it's a bunch of nonsense, it leaves a lot of holes unfilled, it has no beginning and no end, it's incomprehensible, it's incoherent, and the ending looks more like I couldn't continue writing and just finished it.

God, there are so many typos