Confession to the Beautiful Master at the Beginning

It's pretty good, and the foreshadowing is okay. It feels a bit short, maybe because I am a fast reader, but I suggest that you write more about the male protagonist and the female protagonist returning to their ordinary lives in the middle, because they are not full of ups and downs all the time. If you read too much, you will get bored!

It looks very good-looking and makes me feel inspired. I hope it will always look this good!

It looks good, but updates are too slow! ! ! ! ! ! !

However, I am not educated enough to travel around the world, but I work hard to practice for the heroine. Even though there are many beautiful women following the hero, the hero remains unmoved because he only has the heroine in his heart. This article is about master-disciple love, and there is a system (Destiny Picture). The Destiny Picture says it is really a trap, but it is really fragrant. None of the difficulties are easy, the rewards are really generous, and the punishments are really cruel. If the male protagonist is invincible at the same level, it won't be any worse if he moves up another level. I hope the author will write more about when the male and female protagonists are together, because I want to eat dog food!

Personally, I don't think it looks good. I feel that the protagonist is constrained by the system. He can do whatever the system tells him to do. Of course he doesn't have to do it, but as a punishment, anyone with a brain would probably not dare not do it.

The plot is very exciting, the male protagonist's character is great, the author would like to give more work.

I am Zhang Qi, nicknamed Taoist Hongmeng. When I created Hongmeng, Hongmeng split a hair and transformed into chaos. Chaos split into a nurturing avenue, and the avenue accepted Sun Tiandao as his disciple. The heavenly way opened up the universe, and the universe nurtured living beings. Among them, Pangu created the world, three thousand gods and demons were killed, and a perverted bird soul escaped. , Escaped to the United States and became an American bird. After practicing, the American bird adopted several pets. Among them, the Japanese dog liked the American bird the most. The bird pooped when the bird was happy. In order to please the bird, the Japanese ate poop, and called the American bird Tianshi (angel). As a result, Japan was stinked to death, and the United States was also eaten by the Japanese dog.

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It feels like the protagonist is just a puppet. He doesn't do things according to his own preferences. He only completes tasks again and again. He has no vitality or vividness at all.