My Beautiful Little Sister

I have read half of it now, and I can see that it is obviously much better than the previous book. After all, the previous book did stretch my hips in the early stages, and the ideas were very good, but there are still some flaws, and it is still a matter of details. Anyone who has read the previous book knows that almost all the important villains and supporting characters in the previous book are diverse and have many roles, but this one has The timing is as tight as the time. For example, there are two funny girls and two seductresses next to the protagonist. Their personalities are shown but their roles are slightly lacking, whether it is before or after, because these people can be regarded as people who can't be seen when looking up and looking down every day. Zhang Xin has a lot of early scenes even if it is not mentioned in the later stage. Because judging from the introduction and content of this book, to protect the family and the country, the husband and wife should work together to protect the family and the country. To do this, a husband and wife alone cannot do it, so there must be friends. So the main line is to protect the family and the country. This is very clear, but it does not prevent there being two sub-lines. One is the main line. The brotherhood and the relationship between husband and wife are all added together, but it makes it richer. After all, even if you start to cultivate immortality, you are still a human being, and you cannot escape the seven emotions and six desires. This introduction is about a husband and wife who are deeply in love and join hands to fight against the enemy. In the beginning, the woman chases the man. There must be two story lines before the protagonist becomes a strong man. Well, as I mentioned... Maybe there will be both of these aspects in the later stage, but in this way, the early stage will be a bit blank and boring. After all, the male protagonist in the early stage only hopes that he can be strong enough to protect his relatives and lovers. You can also see that in the introduction, the character is only noted as Ye Feng. This small detail is all I got it, but at the beginning, the woman chases the man and there are so many people who like the male protagonist. Not to mention starting a harem, at least there is a relationship line, but the female protagonist's scenes in the early stage are really too few, and the relationship between the two is not particularly described in depth. What if there is an accident on the battlefield? Wouldn't it be a pity (although there can be no accidents, but the meaning is the same). For example, two people have jointly made plans several times, and the breakup of the same group can not only gradually increase the relationship between the two, but also make the two people cooperate more and more tacitly. Also, the villain who appears has a low IQ, so it cannot be a one-man show! The previous book was about Harvest in Career and Love, and I can do the same here. Overall, it's pretty good. It doesn't necessarily require perfection, but since the previous book has highlighted this, I can only do it better.

Not bad

Looks good, I hope it will be updated soon.

It's not as good as the last one, but it's still good. Come on, I'm looking forward to the new book.

There are too few updates. Please work hard😬😬

The content is wonderful, the language is concise and exciting. A rare masterpiece, thumbs up to the author! I hope more of your masterpieces will come out!

Social logic is relatively poor