The Game Designer: You Don't Understand Charity

Well, the author is more suitable for the ancient background framework. You can try integrating the game into the ancient background!

It has an old-fashioned flavor, but it's pretty good, but it looks a little weird.

First of all, the plot is too bland and too protracted to make people feel excited about reading the novel. Secondly, it is difficult to distinguish the main character from the first chapter. The number of chapters where the protagonist appears in the book is less than one-tenth of the whole book. Instead, the supporting characters are better portrayed than the protagonist. In other words, the protagonist is the protagonist in the whole novel and only plays a role in advancing the plot. Thirdly, although the writing is not bad, it has nothing to do with it and there is room for improvement.

It has a great sense of immersion, a feeling of awakening all previous memories, and a confrontation of wisdom. I hope it will get better and better in the future.

The plot has ups and downs, and the protagonist Yun Feng is witty, clever, and cunning, and operates step by step.

It's ok. It seems there's no lol in the directory.