King of the Ages

A self-righteous woman, you write that you are a bully when it comes to the heroine. Just because she did something trivial, the hero would be very moved if she was thick-skinned. Are you kidding me? A million-year-old soul has such a psyche? If that's the case, you might as well not write off Nangong or something like that in the 18th Heavenly Guard, and keep her as the heroine. After all, according to your thinking, Nangong has definitely done more touching things than Ye.

There are rich associations, the plot is closely linked, the writing is relatively good, and there are few tremors.

You can't be so mysterious in fantasy novels. Chapter 1274 is still under 18 years old, and the supporting characters and the main characters in it are thousands and hundreds of years old. Even if you are blowing, you are not blowing like this. This is not One Thousand and One Nights.

The author's writing is not good, and he doesn't understand fighting and fighting. The "calling out moves" are all done by anime from the island country for the sake of audio and video effects. If you look at all the fighting matches, who is "telling moves" and "calling moves"? To "call out a move" before making a move is no different from seeking death. This is a sign of a lack of writing skills, and only "calling out a move" behind closed doors. I really don't understand. Couldn't you embellish it with words? ?

The interlocking, twists and turns of the plot are fascinating, and the characters have outstanding personalities, making it difficult to put down. Thank you, author, for your hard work! Please continue to promote

A lot of nonsense and repetitive plots

Hot chicken work, how did the author come up with it?

At least the protagonist should practice a skill to absorb spiritual energy. You only have martial arts but no skills, which is the same as having a car but no gasoline.

At the beginning of the chapter, the protagonist was framed and suffered humiliation, but unexpectedly awakened the memory of his past life and counterattacked strongly, trampling all the enemies under his feet. How wonderful! The author's descriptions are also very rich and make people want to stop.

The biggest problem with this book is that it is too typable, from beginning to end. You should add some plot to it, such as cheating others through betting, participating in an auction house to cheat others, or adding some funny plots.