The Chaos Divine Stone

What if? The protagonist is so kind. He is still alive. He is really Lucky. He helps others casually. He helped the Luo family because it was useful. Then you helped the two twins. What do you mean? It made us feel uncomfortable watching it, but the plot was still very good.

The plot is tight, but there are too many typos. This causes the article to not flow smoothly! Hope to work hard to improve.

The article started with the intention of cultivating immortals. The plot content is okay, but after reading more than 300 chapters, it just collects people and objects into the space, which shows that it is bland. It starts from collecting people and objects and goes back to the past. It is disgusting. As the saying goes, there is no surprise, no danger, no new tricks, no freshness, no taste to be found, no sense of nostalgia, the master of the Chaos God Stone will meet, the protagonist is a human-headed pig brain, The mental ability is mediocre, but the woman becomes the protagonist. It does not show that the Chaos Divine Stone is important to the protagonist. Instead, it only collects people and things. What's worse is that it earns millions and tens of millions, and none of them are useful. It is not written around the key points. It is written with this kind of thinking. There is no focus on how to improve the protagonist's cultivation, and it does not show the magic of the Chaos Divine Stone. , Blindly expanding the space, the article has reached this point, the space ring, and the space treasure have not appeared, and this cultivation has become useless. This is not cultivation, it is better to be a martial arts novel, but the martial arts novel appears again in this space, the secret realm, showing nondescript, the article has reached a high level, the protagonist's cultivation speed is greatly slowed down, and the slow world has stopped. Turning, writing makes the protagonist useless, and does not highlight the protagonist's talent. There are tens of millions of people in the space, but none of them is useful. There are so many people, there is no team of rare soldiers available, everyone has feelings, and everyone is afraid of death. If I continue writing like this, I am afraid that I will include everything in the world, and I have broken away from cultivation. It is better to change the title of the book and call it (Swallowing the Starry Sky)...

The plot is wonderful and colorful:

Splendid

There are no flaws, but there are no highlights either. I'm tired of watching it for so long

Very nice

Very good book

The plot is well written, but the update speed is too slow.

It looks good, but updates are a bit slow.