I Became the Villain Gao Fushuai

In the author's writing, the villain becomes a character with great brains. He gradually achieves a great success and kills the original protagonist. The plot is gripping. Reading this kind of book is a wonderful thing!

In the original plot, the villain was a dog licker, and the lickers destroyed his family. It was the male lead who knelt down and licked her, and the licking became more and more popular. They broke off the engagement, went to see a doctor for the heroine's mother, and gave the heroine 30 million in entrepreneurial funds. However, they still licked her, and she cried about how difficult it was for her to lick. It was really confusing logic and inconsistent. A lot of sailors arrived.

The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing style, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions. There is only one fly in the ointment, the vast ocean is full of water!

The general feeling 😐 feels like there's something missing, but I don't know, forget it, let's just leave it at that.

I have been a eunuch for more than 300 chapters, and the female protagonist is too many to watch.

It's just a gimmick to pretend to be a villain. There is no such thing as a decent villain. Isn't this just what the author had in mind? Most of the protagonists represent decency. They just changed their names. Ye Fan was the protagonist before, and now Su Jingshen is the protagonist. He doesn't write much about the heroines. Okay, just to get ahead of Ye Fan, I hooked up with various heroines in advance, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. It's obviously a harem story, so I don't have to be smart about it, but it doesn't make sense that the story is unhappy, and my outlook on things is a bit strange. I suspect some trolls are giving it good reviews.

The plot is very interesting

I am convinced by this old author, the plot does not have a complete main line. Slapping the protagonist in the face doesn't feel very satisfying, and the plot is just as bland as water. What this kind of villain novel wants is to slap the protagonist in the face and seize an opportunity. Then look at the plot you wrote and it's so confusing. He stole a piece of tiles and stole a brick, and the main character was a eunuch. I was really impressed by this guy. If that doesn't work, just write less about the heroine and more about the emotional line. The most disgusting and toxic thing is the protagonist's sister. You, the protagonist, don't have any excrement in your mind, so you should arrange the green tea in the lunch box first, so you better keep the green tea. How to write this emotional line? The sixth author, wise setting.

There are too many inner dramas, the name is a villain, and the role is a virgin... Not decisive at all

How many children did the protagonist hold hostage to threaten the villain? ? ? Does the author not quite understand what villain means?