Sign in at the Beginning and Become the Supreme Being

The heroine's character is too bad and her family is bad, but the hero is very brainless and only knows how to dote on the heroine. Besides, the supreme bone is so powerful that the hero only has ten dollars, but he has about the same talent as the heroine. The author should pay attention when writing.

The protagonist is very brainless. The heroine obviously wants to kill him, but she loves him in every possible way. I really don't know what the author is thinking. It is obviously a system article, but the system has no sense of existence. The system appears 100 times in the article. It is very confusing. In a word, the book is not good, the protagonist is brainless, and the heroine is a bitch.

Just give it up. It was okay at first, but I occasionally wrote wrong names, which is understandable. But after more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't read it. It was all a mess, the preface didn't match the follower, the chapters could hardly be connected, and the jumps were too big. Moreover, the names of the characters are all wrong. Now this one, now that one, the names have changed and I didn't even notice. In short, it's so uncomfortable to watch.

It's a mess, just writing in vain

The sentence does not make sense

Are those who say it looks good the navy? I can write a novel more logically than you. No one can improve faster than others by taking drugs and cheating. Other people's realms are upgraded based on cultivation. This is entirely a matter of years and years. There is no mid-term, only the peak and early stages. The early stage is fancy, the fiancée's talent is better than him, and the realm of dragon transformation is useless. Fiancée's realm can always keep up

It's really a mess of writing. Even the little people have names, and the Eucharist doesn't even have a name. It's just the Holy Eucharist Holy Land writing there. The top part of the article doesn't follow the next part.

10 To 17 years old is still the peak of the saint king

The sentences are not fluent, the wording is like illiterate, the plot setting is confusing, and there is no logic in the plot arrangement at all.

This is complete nonsense