Mortal Girl's Road to Immortality

I think this novel is very good for three reasons: 1. There is no male protagonist, because I found that the relationship between the male and female protagonists magnifies the love between children, but narrows down the common people. 2. This is a real novel about cultivating immortals. Although the heroine is extremely talented, she does not grow up as fast as some online novels. This speed is very good, which is in line with common sense and also describes the heroine's talent and talent. 3. This novel is not like other immortal novels, which include time travel, rebirth, medical skills, omnipotence, counterattack by losers, and its own space. This is certainly good-looking, but it will become boring if it is too much. Moreover, some authors are also very creative in their writing and can't stand it at all. The heroine of this novel is from this world, and the space she has is the opportunity she has earned. But I also give the author a small suggestion: For example, when writing about the talisman and seal scripts drawn by the heroine, you don't need to write down the quantity in such detail (´-ω-`). All in all, this novel is very beautiful.

It tells the journey of a generation of mortal girls to become immortals. The plot is smooth and reasonable, and all opportunities are arranged just right. There is no exaggeration, there is no male protagonist, there is no cruel scumbag outsmarting the White Lotus, and there are no suitors and other exaggerated plots. The main focus is on cultivating immortals along the way. Compared with other immortality novels, it is more peaceful and consistent with reality. The protagonist has friends from all over the world and is decisive in killing. There is no fantasy like counterattack, self-contained space, system rebirth, etc. The fighting process is written in great detail, allowing us to see that it was truly a fierce battle. All in all, it's very nice to watch. I also have a small suggestion for the author. The fighting process of each scene does not need to be written in such detail.

This is the type of fairy tale that Nian likes, and the eldest heroine has no cp. The heroine Luo Qingci is dedicated to training and single-mindedly just to ascend. She is clean and tidy, and she will take revenge when she has a grudge. This is my favorite heroine~ Qingci is very talented and has great opportunities, but she does not waste herself because of it. Instead, she works hard and keeps improving, and finally succeeds in ascending! The whole text is described in detail, whether it is fighting, training, or breakthroughs. It is written very clearly. Although the pace is a bit fast later, it does not affect the reading at all. It is a truly good book. There are no green tea, White Lotus, Scumbag Man, etc. It makes the body and mind happy. I feel that it is very effective to come here to relieve the mood of being irritated by green tea in other books. Let's just say, why is such a beautiful book not on the list? Is it because the tickets are not in place yet?

The heroine Luo Qingci was destined to have an extraordinary life from the moment she set foot on the road of cultivation. She has a calm temperament, is an independent, calm and mature child. The plot of this book is eloquently told. It is not the same as other articles. There is no male protagonist. The female protagonist is good at drawing talismans and has a strong career ambition. Of course, the author's writing style is also very good. All in all, it is a good book worth staying up late to read.

There is no such thing as rebirth and time travel, it is closer to reality. Although there is space, it makes people feel that they are cultivating immortality through their own efforts instead of blindly relying on golden fingers. I like this ordinary and not exaggerated plot.

Good

There are many descriptions of fighting scenes and the heroine has a good personality.

The heroine was really speechless. After reading the memory, she killed someone and was being hunted. Shouldn't she endure it and report it to the sect first? If you can't bear it, you will make a big plan without regretting it. By the time you regret it, all the people and demons in the Cangxuan Realm will be dead. With such a low IQ, you are very arrogant with your golden finger. You dare to do anything. Four Nascent Souls can make a golden elixir for so long in the early stage. This finger is ridiculously big. Why not let the heroine wipe out all the forces with a wave of her hand? Also, there is too much nonsense in the article, and the words of some minor characters are often used to make the heroine more awesome. I am really drunk, but I don't rush at the critical moment, I just take my time, just like the dead actors on TV who always die when they say the killer's name, it is uncomfortable to watch. The golden finger is huge, ridiculously big. The heroine is brainless and arrogant. She thinks she can do anything and is speechless.

It's like keeping a running account, there's no point, the fighting scenes are just brushed off, and I can't watch them anymore.

First of all, when I read Chapter 40, I rated it Normal for three reasons. 1. The heroine spoke like an adult at the age of 6, or even more mature. 2. The heroine reached the 8th level of Qi training at the age of 6. I felt that it was a little faster. 3. The heroine went out to fight monsters by herself at the age of 6! I really can't convince myself to ignore this, really, 4. The heroine goes out to sell talismans. Her cultivation level is at most five or six levels lower than those of the waiters, but the waiter calls her senior? It's really hard not to ignore it, and when the steward received her and asked her what she wanted, she actually said it was the next one! The manager actually called her "Senior", so I really couldn't complain, so I could only try not to think too much about it.