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The novel is very interesting, but I can't understand the ending.

I'll go, I'll go, this ending caught me off guard. It's so good, why don't you write more about it.

Although there are not many planes traveled, every plane is great, especially the boss wife chapter, which has a strong sense of immersion. Finally burst into tears. The ending is a bit fast, but the author wrote it very well (✪▽✪) Looking forward to the new article (๑˙ー˙๑)

The writing skills of the first few planes are really not good. I can't tell the difference between seniority and cousin. I should know that the child should be called uncle. It's nothing. If you really want to read it, I suggest you read it at the end. If it crashes, don't let it go.

The front is relatively dull and chaotic, without much highlights. The last article, starting from Yueluo, feels like the author suddenly opened up the two channels of Ren and Du, and the plot and writing have been qualitatively improved. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Let me give you my personal opinion. My favorite is the Moonfall chapter, which feels a bit like Inception. You never know which floor you are on. From the time when Ye started giving psychological treatment to Mu and Meng, to when Ye was awakened by Meng's hypnosis, including the Little Red Riding Hood scene when Ye was hypnotized, I personally felt that it was a small climax of the whole book. However, "When you think you have broken through the fog, you find that you are still in the fog." The ending reaches the greatest climax of the entire book. I thought I had stepped out of the small world, but it turned out that it was just my own stream of consciousness.

Very nice

It's just one word—so short! It's really short and not enough to read. If the stories of each world were longer and the details could be worked out, and then some more world stories could be added and made longer, it would be perfect. (۶•౪•)۶❤٩(•౪•٩)

What should I say? There are too many typos. It's very tiring to read. When you see typos, you still have to guess what they mean. The sentences are not broken well. I often get into trouble because of sentence breaks. The writing style is also very immature. The world background is not well constructed. For example, the world of old ladies getting rich in ancient times. Although it is an ancient background, it always feels like rural life in the 1950s. The relationship between the characters is unclear. The relationship between uncle and nephew is clearly written as brother and younger brother. The final ending is also very rushed and confusing. Many pitfalls are not filled in. For example, didn't the little boy jump off the building in the end? It seems like the heroine and the little boy still don't know each other when they repeat it, right? When and where did the little boy hypnotize the heroine? I haven't said any of this. It feels like I just abandoned the previous story just to open up the ending. But I don't want to rewrite it, so I just force the integration.

It's really pretty.

What the hell is that ending?