The Road to Stardom Begins with Barty's Template

It's just that sometimes the protagonist feels frustrated

The beginning is good, but the setting of the protagonist's actual strength is not perfect. It seems that every ability is borrowed and becomes a castle in the air when returned. There is too much foreshadowing in the plot, there is so much gossip that it drives people crazy, there are also many typos, and the author wastes too much pen and ink on the protagonist! It's like he's the only one playing in a game. Nothing goes too far and nothing goes too far. Also there are too few updates. It makes reading very poor.

Come on more! I have no books to read

I couldn't stand it when I saw the warm-up match against Aston Villa. I thought the fans were too retarded. They didn't understand the protagonist's strength, so they booed the protagonist crazily? Where's the joke? Will fans boo the national football team before it starts? Didn't he boo after confirming that the mud could not support the wall? Maybe they won't be optimistic about it, maybe they won't go to the game, but real fans really won't boo their team in advance. Moreover, the fans were still opposing the protagonist when he scored two assists. Are the fans just noobs who can't understand the game? Is it because you don't understand anything that you are against it?

Just read it as a cool article. Real fans don't come. Fake fans can read it.

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There is no reason for the low score

Tj

The author's wry smile makes people feel bad, can't they live without it?