This Thought Becomes an Immortal

I really like it. I've read more than 100 chapters. Overall, it's very good.

Nice

It's okay, the writing is pretty good

It's so disgusting🤢 The male protagonist has been exercising with this female protagonist all day long. He even went there and didn't even look for treasures. The female protagonist is still a Virgin Mary. She also drags the male protagonist to prevent him from practicing. If you can't write emotional scenes, don't write them. What the hell?

It's okay, it can solve the book shortage, but the later version of Marven is a little bit not so good.

I really don't know how you did it. Every chapter has typos and it's so messed up that there is no main line.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I can forget that there are many words and few words in them. The main writing has no taste at all. There is a reason why no one reads it.

The protagonist is a very good man, it makes me want to vomit.

If you have too much sex in your marriage, your divine nature will be weakened. You have to rush for "youth".

As soon as you look at the title of the book, you can tell it's not good.