Starting as a Willow Tree in the Primordial World, I Sign In

This prehistoric novel looks pretty good, and Liu Ming plays a pretty good role in the plot. Later, after leaving the ancient world and arriving in the vast world of gods, I experienced some things. In the end, the tragic ending of Shenhedao made me sigh that it is not easy to practice!

Generally. The plot in the early and middle stages is quite exciting. Personally think: In the middle of Chapter 332, when Shenhuang is mentioned for the first time, it is best to end it directly. I have written the end of the article for you. ["The Great Thousand World of Gods? The previous owner of this place may have been the Disaster Demon God, one of the three thousand Chaos Demon Gods. It seems like it will be a good trip."] [The corner of Liu Ming's mouth raised a slight arc, turned into a stream of light, and suddenly disappeared into the chaotic void...] Then he can hear it done safely!! The story behind! There is absolutely no need to exist!! Some huge flaws that cannot be tolerated: 1. Why do all the beautiful fairies with famous names fall in love with our willow tree? And it's one-sided? If you want to create a love line, why not create a marriage directly? What do you want to illustrate by creating this feeling of "thousands of women come to court"? I don't think it adds anything meaningful to the plot. 2. The fate of Yang Jian and Sun Wukong makes people very uncomfortable. Because Yang Tianyou disappeared, it was completely unnecessary for Yang Jian to find out about this person, but it was not completely incomprehensible. But it's unnecessary to take out Sun Wukong as well. Since it has been said that the prehistoric times do not keep track of years, and since we are afraid that the Second Saints will cause trouble, wouldn't it be a good idea to swim until the catastrophe of Journey to the West has been over? Is it necessary to run to the outer world of chaos? He died there in the end! Quite unnecessary. It's really not necessary. I found out that the author is a Six-Ear Party member. Maybe it's because I personally like Sun Wukong very much. Therefore, Sun Wukong's fate made me feel very uncomfortable. He actually had Liu'er devour his essence. This made me very uncomfortable. 3. There is almost no mention of the sign-in system when entering Chaos. I can't think of any other magic weapons to give him later. He has too many magic weapons, so there's no need to give them to him, right? So the author simply threw this system away. Oh. Just like his Tao, with fire and thunder, and a trace of vitality, it should be of the wood attribute, so what about metal, water, earth, wind, etc., Are not going to be developed for him? If he goes to any holy place, he can just sign in? The Demonic Beginning Technique, such a heaven-defying thing can actually come out, so why not just create a technique that can be used to clone gods and demons? It's not surprising that the check-in system gives such an awesome thing. Doesn't it have to be a magic weapon? Anyway, the more I write, the more it collapses. 4. The male protagonist is dead. I can vaguely understand that the author may want to create a reincarnation. That is to say, it is precisely because of the little willow in the past that there is a willow tree at the beginning, and it is precisely because this willow tree died on another continent that it became extremely weak and turned into a ray of soul to enter the six reincarnations. Like a Möbius strip, there is no beginning and never an end. Just an endless cycle. Thinking about this position, he actually has a very creepy and terrifying feeling when you think about it. That might not be too bad, but me! At once! Yes! No! Catch! By!!!!!! How come the male protagonist gets stronger and stronger in the end, and then suddenly disappears? Intellectually I think it's good, but emotionally I don't accept it. Moreover, he wrote it too hastily. At least he gave a layout. Many things were not explained at all. What about the system? Watch him die? What about those endless treasures brought from ancient times? Hongjun can still be in Tiandao! Why did his whole body turn gray as soon as his body was destroyed? Just like the legend said, all your ancient ashes were blown away? Then why can other powerful people change into a secret realm after death, but he has to become a scumbag? To put it bluntly, you just don't want to write anymore, and you want to abandon the article. If you want to abandon the article, you can do it. You can mark it as finished, but if you don't actually finish it, won't it be over? Why write someone to death? Is it easy for someone to work so hard to become a Taoist master? Is it easy? Ah! Please don't kill the protagonist casually. I really like Q. I didn't want to write a comment at first, but the more I thought about it, the angrier I became and couldn't help it. (So when I said that the plot was exciting in the review, I meant that the early stage was really exciting. When I said that the writing was not good, it was because the contrast between the story and the rest of the story was too great. I can only think it was a writing problem.) This review only represents my personal views. Seek common ground while reserving differences. Please do not insult me. Be grateful.

The first half was pretty good, but the ending left me disappointed (⋟⋞)

Let's get started, the sign-in system is still useful, but it has been useless since leaving the prehistoric era. The author simply forgot about it, but he would suddenly think of signing in the middle. In the later stage, he basically forgot about it. It looked good in the early stage, average in the middle stage, but unfinished in the later stage. The pig's feet died inexplicably and it was over! The system didn't respond either┐(´-`)┌. The prehistoric part was okay, but once I left the prehistoric land and went to another realm, I lost sight of it! As for going back to the prehistoric times, the one who went back when he finally died is also over (ー_ー)!!

Wonderful and interesting, hmm.

I like

What have they been written about since the dawn of time?

He has been messing around since he left Honghuang, and he was completely drooling all the way to the end? What the hell are you writing? It's a pity that the foreshadowing is so good.

This book ends with the main character being crippled. Haha, I'm so drunk. I don't want to give this book even one star.

It's really good, but the word count is a bit short.