Xuanyuan Magic

Thank you for your hard work, author. With your rich imagination, broad knowledge, and unique perspectives, you have written works that I like to see. It's just that the ending was a little hasty

The author wrote all his cowardice and nagging into the character of Pig's Foot. It's extremely disgusting.

The characters in the author's works are all vividly depicted and have distinct personalities. The sect of Jianzhai is very pleasing to my eyes, especially Feixian and Xiao Wuji. There are so many beauties, all of them gorgeous. It's a pity that the five or six people who were entangled with Su Fu were all demons and ghosts, but none of them were human!

The content of the writing is okay, but the main character is always gone, and all I talk about are the supporting characters. The main character is gone. Is it useful to talk about those supporting characters? Who is watching?

The style category is a great competition, but the difference is not even a little bit different. Other mortals would dare to kill the disciples of the rich clan to seize the opportunity. Killing people here depends on the background, looking forward and backward, being timid, crossing two common problems, parents worshiping heaven and acting like actors, recognizing parents and worshiping ancestors for eighteen generations, stitching together from time to time, and Changshan Zhao Zilong makes it up, either righteous or evil, hypocrites are the most disgusting, using tens of thousands of mortals as pawns, what if your mother and the whole world choose, this kind of writing is the most disgusting

There are many typos and grammatical errors. When I first read the first three chapters, there were no typos or grammatical errors, and the punctuation marks were also used correctly. Later on, not only did typos and grammatical errors appear frequently, but punctuation marks were also used incorrectly. I'm a bit stuck on the plot. More than a hundred chapters have passed, and I'm still chattering about the Guiyuan realm.

What makes me speechless is watching, you summoned Changshan Zhao Zilong to me to open Wushuang. I am really speechless. When writing novels, I am most afraid of intruders and it is very fragmented.

He only gets stabbed, doesn't know how to take the initiative, and just keeps trying for luck. Didn't see it,