I Have Immortality

This novel wants to be cool but not thorough. It wants to be deep but not layered enough. There are problems in the early stages but they are not outstanding. Before the 100th chapter, there are frequent mindless plots that forcefully reduce the wit. Note: It is quite obvious. Part of the plot in the early stage has been foreshadowed, and it seems that there are not many brainless places. However, before and after entering the Tianmen Sect, a very serious balance of combat power and brainless plots appeared. The author can only say that there may not even be an outline. I will give an example. The combat power in the article, uncultivated, Dao Foundation, Golden Pill, Dao Fruit, is divided into red and blue, which is meat. Method, the protagonist can draw the spell of the second golden elixir at the third level of the Daoji. This may be understood as cheating, but the performance of the golden elixir can be said to be quite poor. More than 100 golden elixirs and the following 5,000 golden elixirs are far behind the protagonist in terms of reaction speed, physical strength, protective equipment, and backhand, including their IQ. These two groups of people are at the level of young children. One group was killed by the monster, and the other group was killed by the card monster. They had more than 5,000 golden elixirs, and 5 of them were killed by the card monster, plus a peak Taoist fruit (the protagonist used the Taoguo as a golden elixir, and the golden elixir as a Taoist base. At that time, the understanding of the Taoguo was basically 0, and the author did not introduce it. Then it was gone, and there were a few foreshadowings. Zhang, the most powerful sect. I don't know what the use of this golden elixir is. I don't feel bad if so many people die. Thanks to the previous golden elixir, one city can be the king.) This is still the strongest sect in this area. The disciple of the immortal professor is also ranked on the strongest list. I suggest the author change it to me killing random NPCs in the fantasy continent.

The storyline is touching and good, but the ending is too dull.

It would be understandable if the Huaxia Continent was changed to the Fantasy Continent, but it is still an early monastic novel and is worth reading.

It doesn't look good, the combat power is chaotic, the protagonist's team combat power soars in the later stage, the supporting characters have been practicing for many years and have been unable to break through, but after meeting the protagonist, they soar and break through. How can they be said to be talented and reasonable?

When I read Chapter 23, I don't know what the hell you wrote?