Xuntianji

Not bad

Smooth

The plot is messy, there are countless holes left unfilled, and the story is rushed and unfinished. It is not recommended to waste time reading.

It ends too soon! 80 Points!

It can only be said that many places or details are disappointing. For example, in more than 240 chapters, he revealed to a woman he had just met not long ago that he had a lot of high-grade spiritual stones. Although it was to escape later, he obviously didn't need to say that he had so many spiritual stones to solve the problem, so why bother. You don't understand even if you don't reveal your wealth, you are asking for trouble. If you can survive, you can only say that you are worthy of being the protagonist. Personally, I feel it's quite LA JI.

I wanted to delete less than half of it after I saw it. The protagonist didn't know which one was more useful. His level of alchemy cultivation was still so low. He only hit people by forcefully charging into the formation. Is this a bad move?

The male protagonist's IQ is too low and he doesn't want to look stupid! Abandon books

Well enough

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage Guang's face became gloomy, and he was trying his best without thinking. The more he watched, the more boring he became.

The writing style is immature, the preface is unclear, and many places are illogical. I didn't know anything when I joined the Holy Alchemy Palace. In the past, I practiced the Star Transformation Technique, and later I blew the Star Transformation Technique into the sky, but Su Yang did not achieve anything famous. It was said at the beginning that the Alchemy Palace deceived Su Yang, but there was no explanation behind what it had deceived him. All in all, it was confusing and very awkward. ╮(╯＿╰)╭Be careful to avoid pitfalls from behind!