Drunk in Dream of the Red Chamber: The Magic Jade

The author has not done much in-depth research on Dream of Red Mansions. He just borrowed a shell and wrote it all based on his own imagination.

A lot of the plot is discontinuous, one scene at a time and another scene at another time, making it completely confusing. Also, I think you, the author, have seriously strayed from the topic. Who do readers mainly look at when watching Red Mansions? Author, you should think about it carefully. You adapted Red Mansions without writing your own style. Readers of such a work would be better off reading the original work. Look at your book, the male protagonist is barely passing, and the heroine is confused and unclear, Baochai? Or Daiyu? Or a maid? The maid is somewhat similar to the heroine, but there are several maids who are good friends with the hero. It's said that it's Baochai and Sister Lin, it's almost mentioned in a few strokes... Readers see Red Mansion, to put it bluntly, it is for Sister Lin, and there are also a few who are here for Baochai. You have deviated from the theme too much.

Too bad

Can a licking dog and a stallion become one? It seems that the editor is single and has no deep understanding.