Global Catastrophe: I Am the Patron Saint of China

There is something unreasonable. We killed so many giant beasts earlier. Wouldn't the meat be used as a tooth-beating sacrifice?

Generally

This book is quite good. Although I borrowed a little bit from a certain book in the early stages, I wrote the rest of it myself.

The protagonist has so many opportunities and powerful talents that he can catch up in practice, so don't write about how strong the protagonist is.

Not bad, I hope there will be a follow-up

Originally, I thought it would be better if I read your comments before reading them. Who knew that your comments can also be deceiving? You comment on things, things that should be asked, but don't ask about things that should be said. If you don't say anything, why are you talking about those things to eat? For example, why can't that scorpion in the desert use cannons to bombard it? Should we keep it to grow rust, or should we keep it to grow mushrooms? There are new weapons, why don't we keep the old weapons? If you have to use guns to carry others, if that doesn't work, evacuate. You would rather leave the city completely. You don't even know how to use cannons. Don't tell me that a general with stars has no artillery or tanks under his command. You are obviously just a charlatan.

Hehe, you have to let others fall into the trap, okay?

No trouble,

It's so long-winded. We're already a third of the way through the book, and the other world hasn't arrived yet. The rest of the book is probably hasty and there's no need to read on. The whole text is a routine, and the writing level needs to be improved.

The whole text is a routine