The Immortal Fate of the Six Desires

As mentioned at the beginning, the mortal world is basically a modern world, with sports cars and the like, but later there were none, and then there were palaces and the like, and wars were fought on horseback, and it was completely chaotic. Everyone in this article, including the male protagonist, is a holy lady. Instead of helping the good people to speak, they go to stand in a group with the bad people. A bad guy comes to your house. Then those holy mothers run to persuade the male protagonist to let the bad guy go. Isn't this nonsense? There is also the old man named Hua who asked the army to kill more than a thousand civilians, but in the end there are still people interceding for him? Even if he does not die, he will be restored to his cultivation, and he is said to have made up for his mistakes? What logic?

After reading more than 40 chapters, I feel it is very novel. Unlike other novels that are either pretentious or in the way of being pretentious.

It started well, the author started drinking melatonin as he wrote it.

Looks good

Really bad

All in all, it suits my reading taste very well!

This ending is great. I like this ending best. I must praise it.

It's too idealistic. An immortal, a modern person, and an emperor. He is more powerful than the master. Why should he become a disciple? The plot is too rubbish and too holy.

Generally speaking, it is overly righteous and nosy, helping people who have nothing to do and causing trouble for themselves. There is some scheming, but it is too holy, so that I felt extremely boring after reading it halfway. It is all about helping those insignificant things. The story and the time connection of the story are a bit too far-fetched. (Personal opinion) I suggest the author change the routine of future writing. Being too nosy will annoy readers and reduce their enjoyment of the book.

Just for entertainment