Become Invincible by Planting Sunflowers

Not bad except for some water in some places

The subject matter is rare and there are a lot of typos. Please write the article carefully. At least the article made me excited when I read it in the early stages. It's not bad. Come on!

Fine

Excellent goalkeeper Just like a standard hexagonal warrior, he finally broke through the limitations in terms of plot themes and touched the threshold of a masterpiece. However, due to a twist, he still fell short. There is basically nothing to say in all aspects. It is considered a very standard level, definitely not bad, but there is nothing worthy of praise. Except for the plot, it can be said to be a masterpiece of imagination. At first glance, it is a slap in the face, but after reading it deeply, I found that the real core is to explore the truth. In contrast, the strength of the protagonist is only used as an index to promote the development of the plot. The layout and framework of the plot are well grasped, and the looming clues gradually induce the protagonist step by step. Falling into the mire of the truth, readers are also simultaneously pulled into the strange world constructed in the author's mind, and finally the truth of this world is vividly displayed. It must be said that this world is wonderful, grand, surprising, familiar and unfamiliar to us. The author integrates real life and fantasy in his mind very well, and his thoughts are constantly flying on the basis of the two. He boldly imagines and depicts in detail. You have to admire the author's exquisite conception. But if so, it seems okay to take off the title of goalkeeper, and it deserves to be called a masterpiece. However, a twist in the middle and late stages made the book "destined" four times. The author personally proved the existence of fate in the book, making everything become destiny. All the sense of substitution created before collapsed, and all the actions of the protagonist became the fiddling of fate. The original goal of changing one's life against the will of nature seemed to have become a joke, because this goal is also the choice of fate. Choice, but if the protagonist's reluctance and resistance after knowing it, or his still unswerving determination, could be narrated, this turning point may be resolved, but unfortunately not, the plot still advances, and the protagonist's psychological changes are rarely described, as if it has nothing to do with him, leaving only confused readers. The main subject is still the protagonist's psychological transformation process. The description is insufficient, and it seems very cold and dull. It could also be used as a plot where the protagonist deeply explores and thinks about fate and the meaning of life. But I have to say that this book is a good book, impeccable in all aspects, but a single twist can ruin the reader's reading experience and interest. Therefore, it is a pity that it is not a good book, and it is appropriate to call it a goalkeeper of good works.

Let me first say that the framework of the novel written by the author is very good, but the paragraphs and sentences of the article are not smooth, the words are missing, the words are confused, and the reading experience is extremely poor. Don't authors need to proofread their articles before uploading them?

It's good, but some typos affect the reading. The plot is very closely connected and very readable. The protagonist and his supporting characters are very distinctive. They are not brainless or nervous, but they are very active characters.

Very good

Great

It's very interesting. I've been reading it for a long time. In the end, I felt that the ending was really not good. Also, author, when will you publish a new book?

A book that can be read with your brain