The Tang Dynasty Mistakenly Recognized Li Er as His Biological Father

Can you write the protagonist as wise and powerful? How can you tolerate Li Jing's daughter putting a sword on her neck without getting angry? You should slap her in the face and tell her that she doesn't know what to say. These are all books for men. Don't make the protagonist so timid in front of women, why don't you be more domineering? ! ! Be more chauvinistic, doesn't he look good! ! ! Anyone who disobeys will start a fight! One person can carry thousands of horses, so who do you have to be afraid of? Can you write it more passionately? ! ! If you don't accept it, do it! ! !

Seeing the great defeat of the Turks, the entire character collapsed. The 400,000-strong army asked you to lead 18 cavalry and a few thousand troops to fight directly head-on like a fantasy. It was enough to complain. A woman actually jumped up and down. Is it appropriate to have a background of hundreds of thousands of soldiers littering the field with corpses? I'm really not in the mood to read it at this point, and I'm just going to be confused when browsing later...

How can I put it, just from the content, it is still readable, but in the later period, there are problems with missing content, such as the appearance of the Red Mansion, and the relationship between Li Yinhuan and the Red Mansion, which was mentioned in just one sentence; in addition, the Turkic Pearl never appeared again after a few questions; and the importance of the male protagonist was revealed after reading 300 chapters. It can be said that the sense of existence outside of confusion is not high, so it is difficult to tell whether Li Yuan is the protagonist or Li Er and others are the protagonists, which is a bit confusing; the Mohist giant never appeared again after getting the Rubik's Cube, and suddenly used bronze technology to help the male protagonist on the bicycle, which is very confusing... However, without mentioning the taboo issue between the male protagonist's name and Li Yuan, overall, it is quite happy, and it can be seen in the book wasteland...

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It doesn't matter that he has killed hundreds of thousands at the age of 18, or Pig's Foot's indifferent attitude towards his elders, or whatever inventions Pig's Foot has made. Just say that Fang Xuanling, Wei Zheng, and Cheng Yaojin dared to joke with Li Er and grab things, and I was convinced. I'm really convinced.

The plot is too perverted. 19 People killed 500,000 Turks. Why don't you go to heaven? If you have this plot in the early stage, you don't need to write it later. There are too many points to complain about. To others, the protagonist's IQ is 500, but to a few people around him who hide his identity and are full of flaws, his IQ is 250. . Forget it, abandon the book. It's a bit disgusting to watch.

I feel that the emperor and those ministers are all thieves, stealing the protagonist's technology and money. The key point is that the emperor deceived the protagonist from the beginning, and the protagonist is so aggrieved.

A lot of nonsense and slobbery.

It's completely copied from the book, and the plot doesn't go well either.

Bad ending, ended very abruptly