The Invincible Immortal in the City

In addition to being pretentious everywhere, the protagonist acts weakly and incompetently, and talks endless nonsense! The more I look at it, the more bored I feel! The plot is tacky and boring! The language is even more featureless! The whole world only sees the bad rich second generation! If you don't see courage, you won't see conspiracy!

The description of the character plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the character description is okay. The ending is the biggest failure. It seems to be perfunctory and anticlimactic.

Quite refreshing. 😀😀

Don't tell the truth

There is just no follow-up. I remember the ending was very casual.

To be honest, the early part is very exciting, but the ending is too bad. Also, the title of the book is Cultivation of Immortality. As mentioned before, he is a big brother in Cultivation of Immortality, but in the later period, it becomes martial arts, and it only ends with the golden elixir. To sum up, it is not too bad. I suggest that you end with the content when writing the ending in the future.

The plot is exciting, the sentences are fluent, and it is beautiful to watch.

Innovative and integrated with real life

I seriously suspect that the author is a psychopath and writes at a kindergarten level.

This book has such a high score. I don't know how much money was spent. The ending is so rubbish. It ends without saying anything.