The Book-Wearing Boss Is Making Waves in the World of Immortality

There were many comments about this book when I saw it before, but now they have all disappeared. I took a look and saw that I went to the other side of the continent to collect zombie girls. Judging from the current situation, the settings are confusing, really messy. For example, the previously mentioned setting of entering a secret realm changed into the setting of another secret realm of Xiao Huangquan. Then there is the issue of the heroine wearing a book. It is not mentioned at all that the heroine has read the book. How do you know it is a book passing through? It has also been said that Jin Youxin is another person who wears books. She knows the original plot, but the heroine does not. But how does the heroine know about the original heroine without knowing the plot? It is very strange. In addition, the names of people that pop up out of nowhere are also weird. For example, if someone writes something like an old man, his name will become Old Man XX. In addition, there is almost no description of appearance, and now I only have the impression that the female protagonist is small and cute, and the new person who appears to be the male protagonist is a tall, dark and handsome guy. In the end, there was a completely unforeseen change in the scene and plot. Inexplicably, I ended up in another scene, doing something completely different from before, which was confusing. So far, it feels like it is just following the old routine of previous strong female novels under the guise of time-traveling books, such as time-traveling agents entering the academy, having a bizarre life experience and being betrayed, etc. There is no new idea, and the more I read, the more boring it becomes. I stopped pursuing it because I felt it wasn't my type and the introduction deceived me. I've written so much without scolding, and I hope it won't be deleted like the previous comments. I also hope that the author can check the settings and write better and better.

I really like this big book, and the plot is also very good. I read the updates together, and there are new ones every day. It's not enough. There is no sticky love, and there is no halo plot with a brainless protagonist. It's a conscience article.

It makes Monk Zhanger scratch his head. Some of the prefaces don't match the afterwords. The whole novel is like a black hole jumping, now this time, now that time, wherever he wants to go... I hope the author can adjust the framework structure before writing the novel, otherwise I will really be confused 😂

The plot is good, but there are too many typos.

The outline of the story may be a good one, but the writing is hard to describe, the narrative is straightforward and awkwardly humorous, the relationships between the characters are awkward, and the people around the heroine feel like they can't get close to each other no matter how much they write. The heroine got a lot of opportunities, but she just got them, and she didn't show the role of these treasures at all. The story line is also unclear. At the beginning, I was still fighting for the Nether Clan. As a result, an ancestor from the Nether Clan came out and forcibly terminated the contract between the heroine and the new Nether Clan F4. The heroine had no responsibility in this area and wandered around like a vagabond. It didn't feel like the plot was being followed at all.

So pretty!

It's a bit confusing later on, there are too many repetitions.

A bookworm of ten years found it very interesting. The heroine is very smart. She is neither a virgin nor stupid, which is also good for her friends. The author has made each good and bad person very distinct. Some people choose to betray the heroine and end up offline, while others unswervingly trust the heroine. The heroine is also very clear about grievances and grievances. The outline is very comprehensive, covering everything from Qi training to deity. It may be a little confusing at first, because the heroine is practicing body training, cultivation, and spiritual consciousness. . The ending was written very quickly, and it felt like it was written at 3x speed, so it was a bit rushed. I didn't understand how the heroine accidentally ended up in the Small Underworld after turning into an egg. Ah Sheng also appeared later. I felt that he only appeared to make a pill for the heroine. Although the author didn't write it, those friends who didn't cultivate enough must have reunited with the heroine in the end.

The story concept is novel and compact, but there are too many repetitive chapters and the writing is average.

The sentences are not fluent, the writing is poor, and it is difficult to read.