Silly Son-In-Law

There are too many typos, how dare you publish a novel?

What the hell

If you want to watch the plot, pure love, harem, city, business war, rebirth and persuasion to quit! ! ! PS: If you like to read stallion and teddy novels, you can read them. For such people, this is the only one to read. The more perverted your mentality is, the more you will like reading this book. If you want to have a harem, then have a harem. If you want pure love, then have pure love. But you do it seven or eight times without engaging in it. Every time you tell your wife that you are going out to show off, you feel disgusted. You feel so affectionate with your wife in the first few seconds, but you hate it when you go out to pick up girls. You say you don't want to have too many regrets in this life, and the next second you pick up a different girl, and you don't know anyone. Do you like this kind of perverted literature? I can watch Pure Love or Harem, but can you stop pretending? Pretending is perverted and embarrassing. He says he has been reborn a thousand times, but in fact he should be an ancient person. I didn't mention it at all in the previous article. Anyway, I can't stand such a psychopathic drama. I'm in love, I don't know if it was mentioned later, but I read the table of contents, and the last chapter, "Ascension," made me laugh to death. Later, I started to learn about the classic cultivation of immortality. Anyway, the plot of this kind of mating male protagonist is a gentleman in the front, abiding by the rules, not messing around, but you can mess around. Flirting, and then accidentally sleeping with a girl, okay, I started the unlimited fire mode, breeding everywhere. Think about it, this kind of male protagonist has lived more than a thousand times, and his ideological consciousness is still like copying a hydrology outline. Since his kidneys are so So good, why do I say that those who like harems should not watch it, because a harem is a harem, and Stallion Teddy is a Stallion Teddy. Even a pseudo-harem is fine, but for Stallion Teddy, I went directly to watch the movie on Wallpaper. Do I still need to watch this disgusting thing? My ideal harem is something like The Demon God, with no more and no less female protagonists, and every emotional line is rich and reasonable. Oh, it's not like this novel, where the female protagonist becomes humbler as she goes to the back. As mentioned above, there are so many good ones, but then, the woman always wants to climb up to the man. The master's bed, well, the more I talk about it, the angrier I get. There are more and more of this kind of stallion novels now. I don't even want to step into the trap. It's still a problem. The problem of typos. I'm a fan of novels, so I'm not sure about it, but this is the problem that's been talked about the most in the comment area. It should exist.

There are too many typos, some sentences are incomprehensible, and the ending seems to be unfinished (I only read the early part and the ending). In fact, in my opinion, the beginning of this book is good, but I don't really like the content of cultivating immortals. If there is no content of cultivating immortals, and it is all about the male protagonist fighting wits and courage with the hell killer organization, I think it will be very interesting.

You have the nerve to ask for praise after writing like this?

A silly boy in the village had a ridiculous dream.

A bad novel, not recommended to read. . .

We're almost halfway through, the male protagonist is so fucking useless

The male protagonist is so scumbag!

I can only read more than 100 chapters, so don't read anymore. Skip. I seem to remember that the heroine didn't get her first blood until the end of the book, right? ? Eunuch