Taoist Priest Goes Down the Mountain

The plot is quite interesting with twists and turns, the writing is okay, the sentences are fluent, there are not many typos, the updates are too slow, and the continuity is very poor, and it is easy for people to lose interest in reading! For the author's reference only! Please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

I finished reading it in two days. It's not satisfying.

The writing is good, but a bit too slow. I hope the author will work hard. Thank you for your hard work.

What's the matter? It's been a long time since it's been updated. Are you not going to write it down anymore? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? :

The writing is a bit confusing, with few typos and smooth flow. I like it and have read thousands of chapters.

Update quickly, at least five chapters a day!

The content is exciting, but it starts at the beginning and ends at the end, so I can only rate it as average!

It looks so good, but the update is too slow. It took me a long time to finish reading it before updating it.

You lost it halfway through writing

Nice